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        You are a Tiger,
      and I am your prey.
      
       DEVOUR ME.
      Until there is
         no more
      Flesh to feast on.

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Written April 11th, 2005

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  • Dime333
    January 9, 2006
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    Cannibalisticly Seductive

    Ravenous! In darkness crawl, and recall my mouth, as I eat your flesh.
    Tiger, Tiger, burning bright, you owe me a shot tonight! (so I can smile my black toothed grin


  • irukandji
    December 12, 2005
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    Striking!

    Ooo! This evokes some powerful feelings inside of me. I found it invitingly erotic, yet passively seductive. With very few words, you captured the essence of desire of the flesh.
    From the reading of this I wish to become the devoured too!

  • william mae
    April 14, 2005
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    I like this, sometimes love makes us want everthing from the one we love. More than they can even give. beautiful


  • zzzzz gold member
    April 11, 2005
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    2 Short, But don't Abort

    Beast of a soul.
    poetry hole.
    tiger lunches,
    flesh she munches,
    regurgitate and defecate..
    starvation...til 2 morrow &
    another victim she takes.

    Don't hang out, write some more!