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I Am (2)

 

I am waiting
For a hand or a smile
Something close to my heart
Something to reach me

 

I am trying
To find a place to hide
Somewhere safe and secret
Somewhere far away

 

I am longing
For someone to know me
Someone gentle and kind
Someone to understand

 

I am crying
Desolation fills in
Feeling empty and unworthy
Feeling nothing at all...

 

I am willing
To give everything away
Every item, every moment
Every thought from my mind

 

I am dying
To somehow feel something
Any honest, true emotion
Any shred of passion

 

I am waiting
I am trying
I am longing
I am crying
I am willing
I am dying
I am... fine

Author notes

Isn't it great how postpartum depression makes you feel? *sigh*

Oh yeah, this is kinda lyrics. If you know the song "Color Blind" by Counting Crows, its alot like that... so yeah...
Written April 11th, 2005

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  • RomanticDreamer
    April 12, 2005
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    Wow, babe. Very well done. I love the ending.. I am ... fine. Very well done, my love. Bravo, my dear. Bravo.