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Thinking of You

 

I think of you every chance I get
when I'm on the phone with you
when I'm sitting right in front of you
I think of you when I'm asleep

Don't tell me that I'm to young to love
I'm not I know what I want when I want it
Don't try to stop me I'll get it weather you like it or not

I love you with all my heart
Just tell me you feel the same
Don't lie I can't take another heartache
I really love you
Do you love me too?

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Written April 11th, 2005

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  • TheNamelessOne
    June 2, 2005
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    Kudos! Lots of kudos to you! I thought it was a good poem! So sad though...I liked it alot though.
    -Jarrod-

  • TheTeenDream
    May 24, 2005
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    Aww...i really liked this piece. I could definitely relate to it. I give you props on a great piece and keep up the good writing skills.

  • unabletobesane7
    May 9, 2005
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    I like dis poem.. its really cute!

  • sk8terbabe1996
    April 13, 2005
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    i am sool glade u r her wit me

  • RedneckBaby
    April 12, 2005
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    think you so much i really do love my bf too and i wish you the best of luck with your bf

  • Apathetic-Lover
    April 11, 2005
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    Awww how sweet. This is how I feel about my boyfriend... but people tell us we're too young... but I know different. Great job.... I really know how oyu feel.

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