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Sweet Annie

Blossoming, smiles flourish upon your face
as your fertile heart prospers with hope
Joy flows endlessly from your true self
empowering the spirit to dance

Golden, your words sail
therapeutic to the artistic soul

Embracing positivity,
you follow your inner voice
enchanting all to embrace the world

Strong, your intentions
Your passion seeping through
your delicate words,
intoxicating us with
divine beauty

Gracefully, your peacefulness
overcomes our hearts

Relaxing in the gentle waves of your love,
we adore thee
Sweet Annie

Author notes

This is dedicated to Haran, a beautiful soul here at AllPoetry. Love and Blessings, Ashlee
Written April 11th, 2005

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  • ecrivain01
    August 13, 2005
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    Very nice. I understand that Haran has left the site. That's too bad. It's very unfortunate that she felt constrained to do that. Anyway, good job on the poem.


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 25, 2005
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    AMAZING POEM

    This is beautiful and so describes sweet Annie. She is one of the lovliest persons I know on here and a dear friend. Thank you for honoring her with such a wonderful poem. God Bless. Take care, Sandy


  • April 17, 2005
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    Thanks to your for entering
    ~J


  • Alahmorah
    April 12, 2005
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    Ha...I didn't do that on purpose, I wanted it in italics, and that's what happened...I'm removing it, though. Thanks for the comment.
    Love and Blessings, Ashlee


  • ShatteredSilverStar
    April 12, 2005
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    i like it with or without the / so there. hee hee he, great dedication poem, beautifully penned, keep up the good work and do not stop writing..way to go my fellow poet

  • piccola silver member
    April 12, 2005
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    take the/ out of the first stanza..it makes it look too hurried..like you don't care. otherwise its real nice.


  • joliemere
    April 12, 2005
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    "Your passion seeping through
    your delicate words,
    intoxicating us with
    divine beauty"

    This is my favorite stanza. It is very rare that another poet will touch our soul with their words, and it is a blessed thing when it does happen. This annie sounds like a good friend and a thought inspiring poet. Awesome write and good luck in the contest!

  • PennyB
    April 11, 2005
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    This is very sweet and well written. A very nice dedication to a friend and fellow poet. Good luck in the contest and God Bless, Penny


  • Alahmorah
    April 11, 2005
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    Thank you so much. I am honored to write something about you. You really make me smile every day.
    Love and Blessings, Ashlee


  • April 11, 2005
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    Very Beautiful!

    Ashlee, come on over here and let me give ya a big Sweetie, you are so kind to write something so lovely....about me I adore it, you have touched my heart, but you do everyday... your kindness extends to all of us, your beauty shines each day ... It warms my heart to see your name on my pages, what a precious sweet friend you are...this is a winner in my book I love it! I'm making a copy if that is ok, I haven't been able to post links on my page, but I'm going now to add you on my author's page thanking you for this precious gift. Much love and many blessing to you my sweet friend, Annie
    Edited on Apr 11, 6:19 p.m. because ''.

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