Blossoming, smiles flourish upon your face
as your fertile heart prospers with hope
Joy flows endlessly from your true self
empowering the spirit to dance
Golden, your words sail
therapeutic to the artistic soul
Embracing positivity,
you follow your inner voice
enchanting all to embrace the world
Strong, your intentions
Your passion seeping through
your delicate words,
intoxicating us with
divine beauty
Gracefully, your peacefulness
overcomes our hearts
Relaxing in the gentle waves of your love,
we adore thee
Sweet Annie
Author notes
This is dedicated to Haran, a beautiful soul here at AllPoetry. Love and Blessings, Ashlee
Written April 11th, 2005
A contest entry
- Honor A Poet by .
300 points, ended April 17, 2005, 5 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Very nice. I understand that Haran has left the site. That's too bad. It's very unfortunate that she felt constrained to do that. Anyway, good job on the poem.
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AMAZING POEM
This is beautiful and so describes sweet Annie. She is one of the lovliest persons I know on here and a dear friend. Thank you for honoring her with such a wonderful poem. God Bless. Take care, Sandy
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Thanks to your for entering
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Ha...I didn't do that on purpose, I wanted it in italics, and that's what happened...I'm removing it, though. Thanks for the comment.
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i like it with or without the / so there. hee hee he, great dedication poem, beautifully penned, keep up the good work and do not stop writing..way to go my fellow poet
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take the/ out of the first stanza..it makes it look too hurried..like you don't care. otherwise its real nice.
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"Your passion seeping through
your delicate words,
intoxicating us with
divine beauty"
This is my favorite stanza. It is very rare that another poet will touch our soul with their words, and it is a blessed thing when it does happen. This annie sounds like a good friend and a thought inspiring poet. Awesome write and good luck in the contest!
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This is very sweet and well written. A very nice dedication to a friend and fellow poet. Good luck in the contest and God Bless, Penny
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Thank you so much.
I am honored to write something about you. You really make me smile every day.
Love and Blessings, Ashlee
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Very Beautiful!
Ashlee, come on over here and let me give ya a big
Sweetie, you are so kind to write something so lovely....about me
I adore it, you have touched my heart, but you do everyday... your kindness extends to all of us, your beauty shines each day ... It warms my heart to see your name on my pages, what a precious sweet friend you are...this is a winner in my book I love it! I'm making a copy if that is ok, I haven't been able to post links on my page, but I'm going now to add you on my author's page thanking you for this precious gift. Much love and many blessing to you my sweet friend, Annie

Edited on Apr 11, 6:19 p.m. because ''.
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