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Second Time Around

Make me feel loved..
Make me feel wanted
Make me feel as if I’m there…
Please let me know
So I won’t show
The feelings inside
The feelings I can’t hide
These feelings that subside
My heart aches
My tongue taste
Lies that
Despise from
Those who
Seem to tell them best.

Forget others I say
Let me be the one who says
“ I want you, want me...”
But you have someone…
Or someone better than me..
Please don’t lie anymore…

Let this not be the second time this happens
I don’t want to hate you again…

Author notes

Rawr..
Written April 11th, 2005

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