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Wat is it??????????

Wat is it?, Wat is it?
Where can it be??
Where are you going?
you tiny little flea.
Hopping from place to place,
with out a blink
oh no where's it gone?
It flew down the sink.

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Thanks 4 reading my poem I hope you enjoyed reading it.
Written November 4th, 2005

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  • MysticalMelindy
    July 2, 2005
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    Awww, that's so cute! And then, when you least expect it, that little flea comes flying right back out of that sink. Great write, very cute!


  • Pin Cushion Queeny
    May 1, 2005
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    AWWW this is so sweet, I like the cute little happy poems, well done


  • Kerayi
    April 12, 2005
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    lol well done beth this is cute.
    i wanna see loads more


  • Liathano
    April 11, 2005
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    Aww this is cute!! vell done you kel'b! vite zum more vings pleaz zo I may comment on zem, ok.
    Now I am off to zuke zum vones blood
    MMHAAAAAAA

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 11, 2005
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    Nice poem. Short, simple,
    but nice.
    You write well.
    Keep 'em coming!

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