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The cycle of Spring

This is the cycle that's started again:
From Autumn to Winter and now on to Spring.
Shy flowers wake from their rainbow buds,
While April showers burst down from above.
The grey clouds of last year clear to
Reveal a sky of ocean blue.
Sunshine brings out bright new colours
Finally glowing heatedly, making up for before.

Author notes

Just something I felt like writing one day. I know it's not very good but I thought I'd enter a contest just for the fun of it.
Written April 11th, 2005

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  • PromptBananaParty
    April 12, 2005
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    Awesome!

    Yay, short but to the point! It's not like poems I write that go on and on and on about nothing, that's good for you! I like your word choice and use of capitalization. Good luck in the contest (may the best writer win!).

  • Sky Prince Ireland gold member
    April 11, 2005
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    THANK YOU

    Thank you Hannah.
    This is a lovely poem.
    Thank you for entering
    and I wish you a lot of luck.

    Brian