River oh River
your song breathes
soft shadowy syllables
the murmerings of trees
upon the clear skin of water
songs of ancient young souls:
curving clay, moulding dreams
turning it to stones
Water oh Water
whose tears are drifting
on the smell of curling leaves?
whose eyes are becoming
shaded suns
kissing the mourning ferns?
River oh River
journey me in silence
towards your purified heart
i'm resting my feet
upon Time's Embossment
with earth's healing message
vaccinated into my veins
myra
2002
Author notes
Photo taken by Heidi Jansen, who worked with me on my concept "Evalusie"
Written October 30th, 2002
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Thank you Goz - glad you liked.
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don't touch it!
my kind of homeopathic vaccine :)
liked this alot
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Thank you, Terry ... I am caught up in my River Memories ... LOL ... time to move on, I guess ...
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What can I say? Love these types of pieces, as you well know. Again brilliant. -tj- -
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Thank you, Spam ... but as reader you are part, indeed ... :) -
excellent
this is a very soothing and realxing poem it makes you feel like you 've been pulled into it and are a part of what your reading -
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AAAAAH Roo! Hugs ... then the soul of the singing river found its resonance in your heart, too ... It makes me soooooo happy. Thank you, dear friend. -
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All I can say is ' I would allow this poem to be hanged in my house' well done -
Matthew - how do I comment on your comment if your own poetry leaves me dumbfounded? LOL Thank you.
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Your eyes see the world through such strange and wondrous eyes sometimes it makes me want to explode into the mirror image of every little fragment in your imagination, just for a quick Charleston.
this is marvelous:
i'm resting my feet
upon Time's Embossment
with earth's healing message
vaccinated into my veins
matthew
Edited by mushika on right now. -
Philip ;) Close your eyes, Poet, and feel the kiss of Love, writing words in water ...
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Thank you, Kennetta (Keda) for reading ... I am glad if my poem uplifted you. :)
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Another sacredly solid write, myra!
Assonance all over!!! Even a bit of alliteration...but wow, sneaking sounds in every phrase...clever poet!!!
That last stanza really places me into peace...
I wish to visit this River, oh River again- and i do every time I close my eyes... -
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This is an absolutely beautiful piece with nature and human being pulled together, in this write. Fantastic picture! A really great uplifting piece to brighten my day. I really enjoy your talent, style and images....Keep them coming, always looking for a new one to read! thanks for sharing... -
Thank you, Susan, for reading - I so enjoyed your prism of Light ... :)
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Oops i forgot the verdict
Forgive me
Dont touch it
Susan~ -
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Oh Myra
I just got lost in the tranquilty of this'
Thanks so much for this soothing needed write
Beautiful and the pic is too
I have up 2 new ones come see me
Thanks for this one hun:)
Luv ya;)xo
Susan ~
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