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Silence
Ears hear nothing
Eyes see nothing
Communication seems to have faded away

Doubt
Thoughts flow freely through the mind
A never endless stream
Filling up the pond with misery

Fear
Invisible pressure constricting the chest
Everything and nothing seem to fall in around the body
Closing in slow yet fast as pond is overflowing

Hope
Warmth tingling on each nerve
Eyes twinkle from the sun light above
Inside slows the flow of the stream
Outside the rays dry the flood

Strength
A body can only do so much
A mind can push away a pressure that does not exist
A heart can give the mind the hope and strength to accomplish this

Seek
The heart
The mind
To find the possibilities in life

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Written April 10th, 2005

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  • neptune386
    April 10, 2005
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    Wow! You've grown so much in your writing. It's great to see and "hear" from you. It's been too long. This is beautifully written and shows your development. Great job sweetie. Miss you guys much.
    IWD!!

    Alyssa