Our goodbyes rang
With the inevitability of the stroke of midnight
Your reasoning was so...distant
Your emotions...unreadable
You told me that you loved me...that you needed me
So why am i alone and cold?
I gave you all that was left of my innocence
Because i wanted to...because i loved you
And now your fingers are like ice
One the face of my hopes
Wilted by your look of finality
I had once hoped that i would find someone
WHO i could unlock my heart,
And show my true self,
And be accepted,
And feel what it was like to be loved
But now, my heart is buried with that hope
Along with the pictures, the letters...the kisses
They will forever stay there
Because never again will i trust my heart
To anyone....
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Written April 10th, 2005
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thank you
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This is just beautiful
aww i truly love this one it's just so touching and heartbraking
. But yeahh your an amazing writer, i hope you keep it up
<3 Britt
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my comp had a virus, that's why i wasn't on much hehe....but yeah...thanks for stopping by :-)
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Very beautiful sweetie, and so heartbreaking.... I felt every moment in your words... I hope all is well, I haven't seen you much, please take care... Love, Annie
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thank you...although i almost ruined the paper because i was sobbing so hard
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Wow very desperate, very sad. I must say the backround and font colour do add to the poem.
And one more thing: in line 6, it says "along", but I believe you mean "alone". Sorry to be picky! I just noticed it. -
Wordlessly beautiful write.
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