holding you in arms was a dream come true
spending time with u made my day
when i look into your eyes my smile never seem need to fade
saying love u we knew we meant it and we didn't have say any thing more
our love was like a cloud that soar
but i suddenly it hit me u had to let go
and know i sit there in the cold
everyday i miss the moments we shared
everyday till i die i will admit that i love u and i cared
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Written April 10th, 2005
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This is a great write... I like this... this is how I feel about my ex of a year and half... we broke up a year ago and I still miss him dearly... smiles.. great write
Andrea -
aww this is really well writen
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Hey, sis nice poem. I love your poems. I'm stalking you. I know were you live. Call me tonight. Nice poem.
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Beautiful write. Excellent thought. Love is a funny thing.
Thank you for commenting on my poem.
TD -
I really think you made someones day with this poem. I know if someone told me that I would smile and think well of them. good write
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