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dream that turn to reality

 i wish i could say sorry
but really what do i have to say sorry about
when i was with u had no doubts
i could be self being with u was like dream
but then u left
know i am stuck reality

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Written April 10th, 2005

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  • Simply Loved
    April 10, 2005
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    I love it. Its very sad, and it hurts, even though its you or whoever else that experienced it.