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A Marriage

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A marriage starts within the mind, and not within the heart.
Many miss the point of this, and so they drift apart.
Commitment is the word not there, and passion’s not enough
To get you through those trying times, when loving is so tough.


 

The tie that binds the two as one, is one that will not fail,
For when the trials and turmoil come, it always will prevail.
The question’s not to stay or leave, but how to find the cure.
The problems come and then they go, but through it they endure.


 

For when they say the words "I do," those words can’t be ignored,
They don’t just mean, "I’ll hang around until I get too bored."
For in the making of that bond the two become as one,
The union of the two of them should never be undone.

"Hold on," you say, "now wait a sec, you mean there’s no excuse,
No reason in this world at all to turn each other loose?
Aren’t there some things just so bad, there’s only one recourse?
Pack a bag and move on out, then file for a divorce."


 

Well maybe so, there might be some, but if you look around,
The reasons people split apart just don’t seem very sound.
It’s easier to run than work, so they just drift away
To find another to try out, it’s easy, what the hey!


 

So when you’re standing there and you’re about to say, "I do,"
Take another minute please, to think the whole thing through.
To build a life together now, for better or for worse,
You have to live it as you go, there’s no way to rehearse.


 

So just resolve right here, right now, to make it last and last.
The life you share together’s in the future, not the past.
You face the problems that you have, you never run away,
And thus the union is preserved, for now and for al’way.

Author notes

This is for Option B - the alternate.
I've read and commented on Torn Chakra, Malz, Smoochiegirl and others I think.
Written April 10th, 2005

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  • Violet Prince
    May 24, 2005
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    Exceptional. I will definately keep all in mind for the future


  • PerfectImperfection
    April 21, 2005
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    A bit of wise advise and a terrific write as well. Thank you for sharing, congratulations on your win, hope to read more from you...


  • queenie
    April 19, 2005
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    this is a very powerful write.you are a great author and you have a great heart.these things show when you write.this write seems to be so full of wisdom that comes from experience.you have so skillfully written this emotionally indepth advice that could set a couple who are pondering marriage on the right track.you are special and you have done a great service in penning this.

  • Mrs. Dumas silver member
    April 11, 2005
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    Daddy, I always love your work but this one seemed to have so much more behind the words. I think you did great with this. Such an inspiring write you have here; that's for sure. I think that you could easily be a marriage counselor! You have made me think about this and I'm not even planning to get married yet. Well, to Shari, Shell and Michele, but that's different; I won't leave them. I know how hard divorce is, remember? I divorced Jay!!!! LOL!

    Anyways, great job and best of luck in the contest.

    Love
    Jess

  • NomDePlume silver member
    April 11, 2005
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    Bravo!

    Wise and sound words my friend...Thank you for sharing...


  • mystiqstranger
    April 11, 2005
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    wonderful wonderful...and i couldnt possible agree more... i think to many people just jump into marriage and dont realize that it is gonna take work and it aint gonna be easy...i like in runaway bride when he does his whole little proposal spill and says something to the effect that it aint always gonna be easy and it aint always gonna be fun..thats just too true...you gotta hold on to the love and the trust...i could go on and on...but i'll stop now ...lol...good luck in the contest...and God Bless
    tyler


  • Touchof1der silver member
    April 11, 2005
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    Whoa is right! Wonderful words of wisdom my friend! You have passed along not only some great advise, but advise that is reality based. It's not sugar coated and it's not meant to scare or discourage... it just is! And you have penned it in a most exquisite way. Very impressive indeed!
    ♥ Kimberly


  • SexyAngel0418
    April 10, 2005
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    WOW Paul!! This is an AWESOME poem!!! I really like it... It is full of advice and it flows and rhymes good too!!!

    Thank you for entering and good luck!!!

    Hugs,
    Beth


  • M.A.King
    April 10, 2005
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    I wholly agree with your sentiment here and it is expressed in your always wonderful form. Very straight forward and true. Persevering through the hard times is what marriage is about.


  • Claireabelle-
    April 10, 2005
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    Hey there! Great again but I have a question: In the 3rd stanza, 2nd line, it says "They don’t just mean, "I’ll hang around until the get too bored.""...is it supposed to say "They don’t just mean, "I’ll hang around until I get too bored." I was kind of confused and it didnt make much sense to me. But anyways...this is an awesome poem! I would say its one of your best but you have so many poems I dont even think I've read all of them lol!! Anyways,like I said, this is awesome!

  • bewareofcarrots
    April 10, 2005
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    Hey You

    Once again some awesome points and thoughts.. I'm obviously not married, lol, but some good things to think about - you've obviously made a good decision in marrying Kathy so you know what you're talking about Good luck in the contest.

    Becca


  • SuZyCuE
    April 10, 2005
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    This poemn speaks so much truth, though sometimes it is hard to hang on we must understand that life is not always a bowl of cherries, often times there are alot of pits along the way, and true love and commitment to each other will help you sort the two out, and when your done sorting if you have enough cherries left for that big ole cherry pie you will know that all the worst was worth it Great poem Paul, and it couldnt have come at a better time for me to read.

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