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love is

love is....
a rose that was once a seed and slowly grows
love is.....
2 people who hearts are one beat
when they look into each other eyes they no there meant to be
love is....
butterflies flying around your stomach cause of that special person
love is...
is that very first kiss
when u wish u can do that moment again
love is....
when he/she touches your face and get tangles inside
and start to blush and began turn shy
love is...
2 hearts who live on each other love
love is u and i

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Written April 10th, 2005

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  • DawnBaby
    September 11, 2005
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    Great job!

    So sweet, I really enjoyed this, you got it, so emotional and pretty, great job!


  • LionessK gold member
    April 14, 2005
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    This is a very sweet write on love..just makes me sigh..
    you have done a wonderful job with this..I love your last two lines...keep writing and sharing
    and thank you again for commenting on my write..

    ~Kristy

  • LITTLE BLACK HEART
    April 10, 2005
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    THATS TRUE. LUV IS ALL THAT, WHAT U JUST SAID. I LIKE IT ALOT. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK.
    TAKE CARE,
    LITTLE BLACK HEART


  • April 10, 2005
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    great poem i really like it