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Destiny

What is to become of me
I have traveled  many seas
Searched the stars above me
Climbed mountains to where I could not breathe
But this can not be, my Destiny

Hearts will break and love will hurt
But I will find my way
For believing in my dreams will subside my fear of darkness to come

I can bring pleasure to others
Pleasures I can not have
Though I will be imperfect for eternity
Angels will guide me to the place of flawless love
To the place in someone's heart
That is what I want to be, my Destiny

Stars will fall and mountains will crumble
Oceans will come together
But still my very own soul will go on forever
Between my heart and mind
Faith in creation I will find
For only that can be, my Destiny

Author notes

Something i wrote with the goal of giving hope to whoever feels lost in the world. I'm sure it needs some work so i will appreciate any comment you can give.

Written April 10th, 2005

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  • Perilin
    April 10, 2005
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    nice

    beautiful! Has an almost lyrical quality to it with almost a touch of gospel'ness
    Keep it up!

  • Lacyte
    April 10, 2005
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    This is a beautiful piece, and I can't see any need for change... Very well written, from the heart with lovely style. Keep up the good work