To rewrite the Bible is sacrilegious
The words you say are clearly malicious
There's no truth in the Jesus Christ you display
He was a virgin until His dying day
Never was there a man born that was more pure
He was the Son of God for this I am sure
He was tempted by satan just like us all
But to his evil wiles He did not befall
Blasphemy is by far the worse kind of sin
And for this God says Heaven's Land you'll not win
The words that you write are written in disgust
But you can still be saved if In God you trust
Satan loves to prey on the souls that are weak
and in the shallow depths of his mind are meek
But God has granted salvation to much worse
If you repent your sins, His name you not curse
He knows Satan loves those in His Word they abide
But not even he's there, he's left your side
His sole purpose to gain you and suck you in
But not even his loyalty can you win
For satan is deceptive spinning his lies
then he'll leave you cold as you wear his disguise
He hasn't a use for the non-believer
He's won you, you don't see he's a deceiver
If you pick up the "real" Bible this you'll learn
Satan will discard you, your soul left to yearn
He's evil and vicious eluding his tricks
Even in this World his power never sticks
God is more powerful than any forces
He's privy to satan and how he coerces
So you can bash the Bible all that you want
For it is you that satan will tease and taunt
Cuz' you fell for him and his well of deceit
Even he knows that in the end he'll be beat
He just looks for company to have in Hell
and he knows this is a truth you can not tell
You've fallen for satan hook line and sinker
he looks for those that are not a deep thinker
I know in sin it seems easier to live
a false sense of eupohoria sin does give
You see Satan he really doesn't want you
He wants a Christian soul in Christ that is true
But a true Christian wears God's armor of truth
In God's True Word you'll see how satan's uncouth
All the mysteries are uncovered in God's Word
The pure in the heart can see satan's absurd
So it's the Promised Land we will gain one day
a reward we receive as for lost souls we pray!
Author notes
I may be crazy but I just had to enter this one and this was what I was lead to write!
Written April 9th, 2005
In a list
A contest entry
- Bible Bashing. Oh Come all ye Faithful. by ----michael----.
400 points, ended April 15, 2005, 25 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Hehehehe....
You naughty boy, now just STOP it!
Hey, how come my comment on the snot thingy didn't get a comment?? -
You do not represent your cause very well with spelling errors and grammar gaffs. "lead", indeed. YOu are heavy
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not only was it a good poem, the crystal ball was pretty too.x.
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me? immature? I will tell my mummy, or a mod. And you were not the spotlight of my contest (isn't vanity a sin?), spotlights tend to be bright. mwah. blessed be, and lol, the poems that got recognition were the ones that won. the good ones.
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Thank-you for your wonderful comment. Do not worry about how you got here or why. I know that I created the graphic myself and created as a snowglobe and that is all that counts. I appreciated that you took the time to read the poem as well and not just see what all the hype was about with the snowglobe.
May God Bless you in everything you do!
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No, I believe what you said was, "Is that a crystal ball? Burn the witch!" That was not called for. Yes, I contacted the mods because the remark was meant to belittle to me. I would have contacted them even if you had called me 6 legged albatross from neptune However, I have decided that your immaturity is not worth my time. And for those that may find what you call a joke funny, their not worth my time as well. So thank-you for such a wonderful Honorary mention and deeming me so important in your attempt to degrade me, that you made me the spotlight of your contest. I didn't know you cared so much. I am flattered God would be pleased that this poem would get so much recognition over all the others full of filth in this contest!
May God Bless you in everything you do!
Mees♥p -
I'm sorry, truly, but I couldn't help myself. I had to come to check out the snowball/crystal ball issue.
I'm weak I know.. it was the devil made me do it!
I may have got here for all the wrong reasons but I will say your poem flows very nicely and makes for a convincing argument on the pro-God side.
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aw bless. you know, if the mods that you complained to were a court, and you were sueing me for slander, and won, then you would have won only because my claims could be considered feasible, I mean, if for instance I had said you are a 6 legged albatross from neptune it wouldnt even be considered as slander or an insult, because it couldn't possibly be considered as having the slightest chance of being true, but by calling you a witch I am guilty of possible slander. Is there a deep dark secret hidden in that crystal ball? Or are you crying to the mods just to be silly? All I said was before you edited the pic it looked like a crystal ball, and crystal balls are connected with witches and warlocks.
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lol, okay, but you didnt do a very good job, there was no snow in your snow globe. you should thank me for pointing out your schoolgirl type error.
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Regardless, of how the snow got there it is there. Much the same way as if you were to pick up a real snow globe and shake it. I am the artist am I not? I say it is a snowglobe because that is what I made it to be. I do not believe in crystal balls so therefore why would I add one to one of my graphics. I should know what it is I created it.
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lol, no, you cheated by editing snow into it.its a crystal ball!
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There you go! I shook the snowglobe and there is your snow. I forgot for some seeing is believing. And there is no blood on my snow globe so it's not bloody anything!
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lol, indeedy, but the snow does lie at the bottom. its a bloody crystal ball!
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Most snowglobes have to be picked up and shaken before you see the snow. That's not ignorance, that's logic.
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lol, it's missing one key ingredient. snow. or do we just trust that it is there in ignorance?
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It's not a crystal ball. It's a snowglobe. Big difference!
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is there a crystal ball in that pic? burn the witch! thanks for entering
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I'll simply say.... Amen
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I applaud you.
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I admire your courage, strength and gracious way of expressing your beliefs.
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eye opening truth
Oh Messa, I cannot say how I am feeling at this moment. There are no words. Other than perhaps, I love you my true sister! I do feel the Spirits leading here. Just reading through our two poems, it is clearly spelled out how the devil is lying and decieving today. It is so sad to know how he laughs. That those he has blinded really do think that they are following their own thoughts and beliefs with no idea that they are falling for the thoughts that the demons place in their minds. You have done such an excellent job of pointing out how it is a war for our souls. I started with how the devil lies and tricks us, then you come in with his not only lying but laughing about it. One thing is for sure, the truth has surely been pointed out as a light into the darkness. There is no excuse left for not listening. We along with some others have told just how serious taking God's word lightly is. Perhaps, we will not make a difference in the beliefs of others, but we have warned of the consequences. I think that this entire contest may have been inspired. Perhaps, there was leading to even come up with the idea. Then, the Lord had the right poems in place to be entered to shine the light on satan's tricks. Like you, I knew I had to enter and just which poem. I had passed this by a couple of times. I just could not get away from it. So, I came back and put in the poem about deception. Then you are led to take that even farther.
There is NO doubt that God is moving here. It may be for Michael Duvall, or it may be for some who will just read these poems and have their eyes opened. This is one contest that the devil is going to hate was ever held. For now, we will just continue to pray and to write as inspired. God Bless you my dear friend, Penny
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Your words are powerful and passionate. I didn't even look at what this contest was about after reading the title...I didn't want to step foot in to the lies that I felt would be there. You have done a great tribute to the ONE AND ONLY WORD OF GOD. The last words of the Bible state what will happen if any one adds too, or takes away from Its contest. May God have mercy.
Great work mees..
S♠m
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Let me tell you first off that you aren't crazy at all dear friend! you have an own opinion and that's what you come up for, so congratulations for that in the first place! it must have taken lots of courage to enter this contest, that allows bashing the Bible, the book you strongly believe in.
So you can bash the Bible all that you want
For it is you that satan will tease and taunt
--> these two lines here really got my attention I know I'm an atheist, but they just woke my imagination here!
Luckily I am able to have my own thought, but also the fact that I can understand without starting an endless discussion about beliefing or not. that is just such a waste of time!
You did an excellent job with this poem, a perfect rhymescheme and wonderful stand-up for your own beliefs!
You deserve my applaud on this one, and if this computer here allowed me to applaud more than once, then I'd do it!
Leander
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