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False Relations

I don't know why your doing this to me
I'm nor you fucking friend
Why would I be friends with you
When you bring me down.
Your nothing but a replicate of me
You even stoled my boyfriend
I want nothing to do with you
As long as you have Mikey.
Mikey and I had something special
Something you'll never have
And you'll never understand
Why I need him so much.
He is the only person
That could keep me sane
He is the one I love
The one I live for
And now that you've taken him
I have nothing left.
Thanks for ruining my life
But now I have to ruin yours
I only find it fair
That you suffer like I did.
I'll make your life a living hell
And soon you won't have Mikey
Andrea your a whore
I hope you die
Right before
You kiss your sanity good-bye.

Author notes

This was written about the chick that stold my baby away from me.  I wrote it the night we broke up.  But it's all good in the hood now cause me and him are back together and he left that bitch.
ex's are a-holes
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Written April 8th, 2005

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  • April 21, 2005
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    WOW!! This is good..I like how you can feel the anger Great job!!! Keep up the awesome work..