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Yearning (Cinquain)

I yearn
All day, all night
To have you in my bed
For passion in every fashion
I lust.

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Written April 8th, 2005

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    July 26, 2008

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    This is a wonderful cinquain, thank you for entering the contest. Good luck.

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    whisper


  • Ava Noire silver member
    April 11, 2005
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    I am shocked this has yet to recieve a comment Shocked and outraged! Ok I've had my fit for the day

    This is an excellent cinquain. I do know what it is like to have my mind devoted to thoughts of a special someone and you can't wait to be with them again and tear their clothes off and devour them on the floor

    Thanks for entering!