i told myself not to call you.
but i guess i won myself over.
i pressed one..because you were on my speed dial.
and oops, silly me, i loved you all over again.
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sorry it's so brief
Written October 28th, 2002
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Do Not Touch It!
AWWWWWW Yes it really is short and sweet..oops you started to love again..so sweet..I felt this too..man..I could so totally see that happening..the whole dialing the number scene and then losing control to falling in love once again..really amazing feeling aint it? haha..You did a great job expressing it..your words and flow..AWESOME..thanx so much for sharinG! Keep up the great work!
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don't touch it!
Short & Sweet -
don't touch it!
Cute. (but that's just me.)
I like it.
Thanx for sharing
Rodney -
don't touch it!
I finished up on your home page purely by accident, silly me. So of course I read it and laughed. Damn, isn't love like that? Really like the poem. Precise, funny, and just a little deeper than on first reading. I like that. This is just a bit of speed-look at your work but, I'll be back - No red-eye reducing sunglasses and no Arnie accent


