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Angelcake (Desarae)

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Angelcake is really Desarae
Never lets life get her down
Great writer her poems  rule
Energetic and so spirited
Loves hip hop and rap music
Caring  and full  of emotion
A joy to love and care for
Kindness  fills her soul
Everyday she makes me smile

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Desarae is my adopted grandaughter on Ap. She is such a delight and a caring young lady. She brings smiles and joy into my life. I hope I bring some into hers too. I love you Desarae.
Written April 8th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    April 12, 2005
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    Ah Charles, your comments are so warm and make me fell so good. Your encouragment is so appreciated. I like you, write through God. I give Him all the credit. He is also the one that gives me the gift to reach out to Beth, Jacob and Steff and Deasarae. I love them dearly and will always be there if they need me. God bless you. son. You are the sweetest and the greatest. Big Hugs for you.
    Edited on Apr 12, 4:28 p.m. because ''.


  • Onfire4Jesus
    April 11, 2005
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    Wow Sandy!! This was simply wonderful!! As one of your sons here, I just wanted to say that you have an amazingly compassionate heart for others and because of that, you have touched my heart and many many others on this site. You do bring many smiles our way and put happy thoughts into our hearts!! You are so encouraging and so funny!! Your passion for the Lord keeps right on growing and because of that, you will be a great light to many around you.

    Stand strong and stand proud
    and keep on shouting out loud
    To the King of Glories
    as you tell the stories

    Of how He saved your life
    and freed you from pain and strife
    and Opened your heart to a new way
    When you got down on your knees and prayed

    Jesus saved your life from condemnation
    when you finally accepted salvation
    So into the heavens one day we'll trod
    And live forever in the Presence of God!!!

    I love You Sandy!! Keep on writing!! You are one amazing Poet and I know it and your works truly show it!! You are a beacon of light on this poetry site as well!! Never give up and never look back, for Jesus has picked up all of our slack!! He has freed us from the bondage of sin!! Praise the Lord!! I love You mom!! Take care!! God Bless You!!


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 9, 2005
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    Thank you Scott for the nice comment. She is a lovely young lady. You should get to know her. Read some of her poetry. You take care, Sandy

  • Scott Chason
    April 9, 2005
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    Sounds like a healthy friendship


  • Sandygram silver member
    April 8, 2005
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    Awww. That was so sweet of you. I am so glad you enjoyed it. I meant every word I wrote. I am honored to call you my grandaughter. You are a wonderful young lady and I am so happy we got to know each other. Take care, Love, Grandma


    Edited on Apr 08, 2:27 p.m. because ''.


  • ChaingangAngel
    April 8, 2005
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    Thanks it awesome

    Awww thank you grandma that was so sweet of you ,,,,I think Im gonna cry no one has every wrote anyhting about me......

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