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I Hate You

I hate you for what you did to me.
I hate you for how you treated me.
I hate you for how bad you broke my heart.
I hate for who you are to me.
I hate you because I still love you but want to hate you.
I hate you because you now got her not me.

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wtoe about my ex
Written April 8th, 2005

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  • Brokenheartedangel
    June 7, 2005
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    I hate you for what you did to me.
    I hate you for how you treated me.
    I hate you for how bad you broke my heart.
    I hate for who you are to me.
    I hate you because I still love you but want to hate you.
    I hate you because you now got her not me.



  • Axelle Black
    April 19, 2005
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    Oh yes... hatred... so close to love isn't it? Well you just proved it right there with the before-last verse. And well I really really know what you mean by this, and can relate. I hate hating though. Don't know about you but it makes me feel sick. But he deserves it after all doesn't he? I just hate it when people leave other people for someone else out of the blue. How stupid.. Anyways, so well this is raw anger, no doubt about it. And emotion is definitely not what is lacking in there. Quite the hate poem. I hope you showed the creep this poem lol. Anyways, good stuff. And thank you very much for the honest comment

  • darkcloud386
    April 11, 2005
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    rightous, about your ex, right? heh :-D i remembered :-P it kinda reminds me of how i am with my dad...except i dont still love him, i just hate him, anyway. peace