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People to meet

There are people in life, U R supposed to meet,
Or so I believe.
This experience has been GREAT-
And we haven’t even met yet.

But just the sound of your voice,
Lit-up my life- Gave unexpected joy.
The things that U say, the feeling U create,
Has been filling all of my days.

Your words are like lullabies,
At night U R my alibi,
Throughout the day: U R in my mind…
Meeting U will change my life.

Cause there people in life, that U R supposed to meet,
That they enlighten, and they give…
That their words create, and make U feel;

That they are the only thing in mind,
During the entire day & the endless nights.

People so amazing- that make U fly.
People extraordinary, that you can hardly find.
People just like U: That changes lives.

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Something that came 2 mind, and I decided to write.
Written April 8th, 2005

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  • SimplySakina
    November 15, 2005
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    stanza four 'there' was it supposed to be 'there's'???
    yes there truly are those poeple that change your life in ways you never thought possible, even if you may try to ignore forget, your life will always remind you of their existance

    great write

    -Sweetful


  • spamwitch
    June 14, 2005
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    I agree with the above comment this was a very uplifting poem and you chose the perfect background for it as well, keep writing and good job.


  • Andy Stephenson
    April 14, 2005
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    Hi. I am glad that you like "Holdin' On To Memories"

    This is a very uplifting poem and it makes me want to be your friend. Add me to your favorites if you like. I write some adult horror/erotica. If you do not like that type of material, be sure to avoid them. "Holding On To Memories" is a song. I write many songs. You might like my poem, "A Woman Early".

    Andy