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We mix the ingredients together
Half a cup of lust
Half of curiosity
A teaspoon of interest
And a pinch of imagination

You know this recipe off by heart

You scoop me onto your bed
I melt under the heat of your stare

But when you turn up the heat
I made a big mess

I added too much of something
You forgot me in the oven
And you burnt my heart

I watch everything turn to crisp

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meh
Written April 8th, 2005

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  • velvet
    April 12, 2005
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    hehe scoop, ill think bout it


  • Daniela Violin silver member
    April 9, 2005
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    Call this "Scoop", seriously, that's what I would call it LOL.
    This was interesting.


  • classical beauty
    April 9, 2005
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    interesting write i really liked it, hmmmm im tryin to think of title that isn't cliche lol, well u could have recipe for love, recipe for heartbreak, lust and love. well i tried lol, well done and keep on writing x x x