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Rainy Night

Rainy Night
in a darkened house
all are gone
the realms of sleep
welcome them alone
no one wakes
during my revelation
of reality

Rainy Night
one bright warm room
me and my computer
typing away
selling my soul
to the muse of Art

Rainy Night
restless soul
get up wander
throughout the house
treading every stair
wand'ring through every empty room

Rainy Night
silent and yet not
only the rain and the cd speak
a music unto my jaded ears
wander out
my solace is not inside

Rainy Night
standing looking up
see the heavens
rain falling over me
heedless of the wetness
only feeling the calm

Rainy Night
and i'm at peace
spring's blessing
restored once more

Rainy Night
Peaceful night

Author notes

gah... i haven't been on in forever... i just keep writing things in my head... and then never bothering to type it up... poems are my way of ordering my feelings in my head... but i haven't gotten on the computer much... i guess spring is helping....

i'm not cohearent, am i? huh.. though not.. whatever.. i have hellwork to do.
Written April 7th, 2005

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    April 11, 2005
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    sigh......i love happy endings this made me feel so happy. and just as im about to float off into the land of nod myself, what timing!
    everyones asleep in my house too, and usually are when im in this world. no rain to play me to sleep tonight though, oh well. i guess ill settle for silence and dancing shadows.
    i am so grateful to you for sharing. well done!