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Mine

Kneel for me, sweet one,  
in trust and respect;
aise your eyes in supplication,  
submission in every aspect.  
I own your heart and spirit,
your flesh and your mind.  
It is for you to please me  
and in return, I shall be kind.  

I shall tie you to me  
with elegant knots and cord,  
And you will know, in your heart  
that I am truly your Lord.  

Our bonds shall always be more  
than simple chains and rope,
we shall be linked in love,
sexuality and fondest hope!  

I shall be your Mentor,  
your sweet heart's guide;
I will truly be your owner,
mine, the collar you wear with pride.  

Each footstep you take in life
on time's unblemished sands,
will be guided by firm instruction,
placed exactly by my strong hands!

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Written April 7th, 2005

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  • Teranika
    April 9, 2005
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    I think that's amazing, and it definately shows a loving D/S situation.


  • April 7, 2005
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    good

    i think that you may show too much ownership towards your partner instead of an equal bond


  • AzureBlue gold member
    April 7, 2005
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    Obviously some master and slave action goin' on here...good write!

    Lorena