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Lover

Today I lay for you in snow,  
Yesterday in freezing rain.  
To see your look of pleasure  
I’d do it once again.  
 
This bond we share binds stronger  
Than any man-made cord.  
My discomfort is your pleasure.  
Your smile is my reward.  
 
Today I lay for you in snow.  
Tomorrow I may walk thru fire.
The love I’ve sought for all my life  
Is found in your desire.  

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Written April 7th, 2005

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  • KissMeLulu
    April 11, 2005
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    Ohh kinky!

  • xoAngelFreakox
    April 7, 2005
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    wow I really really like this!
    I had to read it twice because it was so good!
    I like how it shows that some people would do anything just to see someone else happy.. awsome write
    -Heather-