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I Cherish You

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I cherish you
even though your heart has turned to stone
and you don't give me a second thought
I cherish you
even though you burn me with the remains
of your soul and you may not feel the same
I cherish you
even though your heart has turned to stone

Author notes

Inspired by a song called Short Stories With Tragic Endings by From Autumn To Ashes. I recommened this song to anyone who likes screaming or hearfelt words sung by a female with a beautiful voice.
Written April 7th, 2005

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  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 11, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words...I have never been in this kind of situation, but I do understand how it feels. I'm glad you like it and the song is awesome as well.
  • tamilosophy
    April 11, 2005
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    painfully beautiful

    Oooh i love that song
    this poem puts into words a feeling all to familiar with many people, the feeling of loving someone who either doesnt love you, or anything for that matter.
    i was recently in this situtaion with my ex-boyfriend and i have to say this poem really touched me because i can relate to it and i am sure many more people will admit this to you.
    i dont know if this is a personal poem, but if it is, i hope things work out for you as soon as possible, as best they can.
    and if this isnt a personal poem i congratulate you for describing something so well that is close to peoples hearts.
    tamilosophy

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 9, 2005
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    Thank you for your kind words. I'm glad you liked the poem.

  • crimsonshadow
    April 9, 2005
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    Wow. The picture was pretty and so was the background, I just had to say that.
    This poem is awesome, it conveys its meaning and engages the reader even though it's not very long. I love it, great job
    -crimsonshadow-

  • GauArrowny
    April 7, 2005
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    Ah yes, more prettiness. Good thing it can't compare to your beauty though. *loves and hugs*

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 7, 2005
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  • Silhouetted Angel
    April 7, 2005
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    tis perdyful. Wonderful job honey

    ~Angel

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 7, 2005
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    This song really gave me the inspiration I needed, since I hadn't been writing much lately. Today, I posted a lot of stuff, so it's a start. Happy downloading!

  • DrawnInBlood
    April 7, 2005
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    Beautiful

    this is awesome. i'll have to download some songs by them. I can relate to the feelings you've conveyed here. You've done a great job.

  • Rose Dark Thorn gold member
    April 7, 2005
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    Thank you. I'm glad you liked it. The song is great. I hope you get the chance to hear it.

  • milkfairy
    April 7, 2005
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    sweet i likes it i think i heard it once not sure but ill check it out
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