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*Hushaby Baby*




Hushaby Baby,
Tonight I値l place you safe from harm,
Tonight I値l place you in my arms,
Keep you safe whilst the world sways.

I could do most anything for you,
Hold you in my freezing arms,
Before you have to go,
Don稚 relax your grip on my right hand,
I値l hold you safe through the night.

Hushaby Baby,
Tonight I値l place you safe and calm,
Tonight I値l place you with a charm,
Protect you from the darkness within.




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May add more to this, not sure if it needs another verse or not.... let me know wat u think!
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Written April 7th, 2005

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  • Pegasus
    March 11, 2006
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    :D

    its lovleh it needs a another verse but lovleyh!!!!love ya franks take care