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The Angel Within

Every time I gaze at my reflection,
I yearn for more
I have so maybe secrets within
The beauty inside
I can not reveal it to many

I long for the chalk, ivory perfection
My core is suited to
the soft skin
I may be original
unusual,
but please accept me
I am tired of mockery
I wish to spread my wings,
pearl, a magickal aura
innocence and purity
revealed by the features
perfection
platinum hair, long
as an elf  
an angelic, pure being
Why can you not accept me
as such?
why do you restrict me to your
human thoughts?
why may I not rise above in my mind?
for what I wish for is something many do not understand
they fear what is different
innocence and purity
the angel within
I have fallen,
but with the fall comes wisdom,
of neutrality
I wish for acceptance
that is all I ask
Neutrality
Balance
No loyalty to a particular sector
Power and wisdom comes hand in hand with neutrality
and balance
I belong to nothing
I love,
but is my love impure?
I can not unravel
the webs spun within my mind
my complexity...
truth alludes me,
in my search
I am told if I am happy,
then complexities no longer matter
but I can not help but doubt,
I am so unsure

Maybe if they came,
I could be finally content
Youthful and pure on the outside
Wise and old within
...please accept me....
this is ME...

the angel within


Author notes

ummmm......just a weird poem I wrote on impulse...and without planning...about me and my weirdness oh well.......
Written April 7th, 2005

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  • x dark fairie x
    May 22, 2005
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    dam you, you stupid good at writing poems person *glares jealously* this is amazing, i no how you feel totally. i love the way you can find the words to express yourself with such flow and ease. -x-x-x-


  • GreensBabe
    April 12, 2005
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    Weired is GOOD!


  • bakacoconut
    April 8, 2005
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    You used a lot of descriptive words... I LIKE YOU! *jumps up and down* Emotion, flowing, and definately a good use of vocabulary I love this write... completely awesome, and normally I prefer rhyming poems, so this is ironic to me Wicked write, my friend.

    Nutty


  • BlooQKazoo
    April 8, 2005
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    weirdness rocks honey! awesome piece, almost a story in a rhythmic flow. lots of emotion and beautifully written with awesome vocabulary. i love it lots, and youll always be my angel
    loves ya loads
    ~*~polly~*~
    ~xXxXxXxXxXx~


  • GhostOfARose-
    April 7, 2005
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    Your half way there hunni. XxxXxxX thnx for starting me along the same journey

  • KodonA
    April 7, 2005
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    I know, and I am glad for that I like post human I wanna be one, everyone who wants to be one can be to

  • GhostOfARose-
    April 7, 2005
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    Wow. I understood most of it
    One day you'll be better than us all (except me ) and the world will be a better place with all of us post-humans lol. One day your river will be as strong as her rock.
    Luv u always
    ~kenaz~

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