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poverty

There are people out there
who cannot stare
who cannot share
they drink dirty water
they eat horrible food
they have nothing to wear
they are nude
but we can help
we can help the stare
we can help share
we can be fair
and send food to show that we care
i wish i could help more
i wish i could open a door
to us helping the worlds poor
even more

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Written April 7th, 2005

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  • Neon Highway
    April 7, 2005
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    is it not obvious. I made a sad face because its a sad subject


  • Fortune
    April 7, 2005
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    what do u mean

  • Neon Highway
    April 7, 2005
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  • Fortune
    April 7, 2005
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    they blind because they cannot afford glasses or medical treatment


  • Neon Highway
    April 7, 2005
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    There are people out there
    who cannot stare

    I don't get it? Why can't they stare. Nice message though. well written

  • Momentaryhappiness
    April 7, 2005
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    I know what your'e trying to say. And i agree. I good write.


  • zzzzz gold member
    April 7, 2005
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    Like your poem. Wish more people in the world shared your view. Keep writing and learning.

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