Clear tears fall onto cheeks of mine,
Tired, wanting to sleep,
Hurting inside, tears make pillows damp,
While I lay; thinking about you
Only missing you; like its our last time together
Behind my eyes, lays my mind,
Memories filled of you,
Your face lingers in the back of my head,
Waiting for another call,
Waiting for another taste of your lips,
Waiting for those three words to be said,
Everything痴 fading away,
Your perfume smell,
Your smile that shines
Your soft skin touch,
Eyes red,
Crying till I知 asleep,
I値l wake up early morning,
Wiping dried tears away,
And start again,
But I値l remember its you I love,
And for that reason,
I'll remember things will be okay
Author notes
I just got home from Hollies on Sunday..I really miss her we had a good spring break. Well at least I did, she was still at school. So I was by myself some of the time. Lol. it was a lot of fun. I really miss her but I feel like me and her are having problems because we did have this number that got us through without being charged it was a 1800 number yup..but they cought us, and made us stop using it bastards..but sense that numbers been turned off we have went back to phone cards and it really sucks because i feel like idk i go crazy if i dont talk to her everyday. But I cannot wait to see her again.
Written April 6th, 2005
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Thanks for the comment, however no my gf and I did not break up, I am sorry about you and your bf though. My gf and I havea long distant relationship and every time i come home from her house it gets hard for us, anyways thanks again about the comment,
you should check some of my newer stuff out...like Love without the E
i love that poem, and doves will hold our love and some others anything that is most recent, or is about love.. lol i'll catch you later thanks again
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I think this is a beautifully written piece. Your sadness is evident but doesn't overwhelm your reader. I felt there was a lot love written in your words and I like the imagery you employ in your piece. Well done and keep up the good work
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Clearly this is a very personal piece and I see you have opted not to receive critical feedback, so I shall just say the emotion is heartfelt.
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if I could I would applaud this a thousand times. I'm giving you all my points just because I love you...good times. One question did you and your g/f/ break up? Me and "slave for women" did. He is gay and I hate him. But I still love him. I wanted to cry cuz this reminded me of him.
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i think its so sweet how much you can love a person.theres a lot of people that dont even believe in love,but reading poems like these,you did a great job and i hope everything goes good with the two of you.
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Baby, HELLO. Don't I tell you all the time how much you mean to me, and how much I love you? Our relationship is hard...we both know that but look how long we have made it work! I made a few mistakes but you looked past that, and I won't ever make them mistakes again. YOU ARE EVERYTHING TO ME! The 1800 i have finally gotten over, but it still hurts not being able to talk to you for hours and hours like we did once before but hey we can still write letters and we can still talk through phone cards although they suck. but babe I didn't mean to hurt you in this poem...I just wanted you to know how bad I missed you. Your perfume smell the smiles you give, the soft skin touch of your hands when we hold hands and all of that i miss it and its lingering away but that doesnt mean i am going to slip away babe you mean the world to me and i dont want you hurt over this poem -k- it was just a write about how I felt..but i didnt mean to make it sound like i was slipping away from you
anyways you just signed off...I love u babe I'll ttyl
Joshuacrisel -
I love you!
Hey it is me! Well you sent me this poem and I liked it but it kind of mad me upset:Everything痴 fading away,
Your perfume smell,
Your smile that shines
Your soft skin touch,
Eyes red,
Crying till I知 asleep,
That made me feel really weird! Are we ok? " really miss her but I feel like me and her are having problems" Joshua as far as i know, we are NOT having any problems. I know that the 800 number is gone, but we are doing just fine. Do you think we are slipping away from eachother? I hope not! You jknow that I love you. But when I read that I kinda felt like that is what you were saying. And I didnt like it at all. We really need to talk. I know you are not fading away from me, but am I fading from you? I juss dont know what to think, You said that everything will be ok...is it? But then I felt batter:But I値l remember its you I love,
And for that reason,
I'll remember things will be okay
That made a little better. You told me to remember to...I will, but will you? Like I said we need to talk! I LOVE YOU AND I DO NOT WANT TO LOOSE YOU!!! YOU ARE EVERYTHING!!! -
like they said- this is extremely beautiful and very well written! good job, keep it up!
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this is very beautiful and herartfelt. i am glad you are happy
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Beautiful
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I'm not having problems with her...me and her are fine..but see shes scared that i will leave her because its really hard our relationship and i tell her all the time were okay im fine with it..and i was basically writing about how i really miss her but i really love her so well be fine anyways i hope your okay...we talked for a bit today..anyways ima go thanks for the comment
Joshuacrisel -
Josh....this is sad...yet so heartfelt and very beautiful. I dont know why you feel you are having problems with her....you just prolly miss her...dearie...
Be strong..and you will make it through...you have thus far...
I am here when you need me.
Liz
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