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I feel

I could be……
In a large crowd
Surrounded by friends
And still be alone

I could……….
Be in a club
Surrounded by people
And still be alone

I could be….
At a family reunion
Self explanatory  
And still be alone

Get the picture…
No matter what
It will always be
Me alone

Author notes

old poem same feeling
Written April 6th, 2005

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  • phoenix777
    April 6, 2005
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    good

    Good poem. Lots of feeling with least amount of descriptive words. Keep up the good work!