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Sweet Dreams

Flesh to flesh
hand in hand
caressing
worshipping

Mouth roams
all over skin
sweet, soft
cries of bliss

Discovering
exploring
hot spots
cold places

Lust inducing
romance
bodies unite
passion released

Warm waters
rising
tidal wave of
ecstasy

Tight embrace
soaked skin
panting breaths
sweet dreams

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Written April 6th, 2005

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  • Flowergirl
    September 16
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    awsome i loved it a lot keep up the great work....
  • stephi39
    August 6
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    awesome!


  • Dishy
    July 24
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    very nice

  • Seven Kinky
    July 15

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    Sweet dreams, indeed! *eyeballs that border and licks lips* Ooooohh yeah.

    Ahem...my bad, got distracted. The poem was very sensual, indeed. It's great how you aren't overt and still manage to call up a lot of HAWT mental imagery. Me likey.

    Hugs and Dirty Laughter,
    YOUR Ex-Hick


  • SilentCriminal
    May 20
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    I love it. Human sexuality is such a beautiful thing described in words such at these. Good Job.

  • Calling Lost Angels
    February 2
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    OH WOW

    This is a very exiting deep poem. It is a treasure to read.


  • GauArrowny
    April 6, 2005
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    Hmm, nice. I like the way it flows so quickly as if it was happening on the page rather than the words. Great job.
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