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Tina




Thoughts always consuming my mind, many seeming of the random kind
Incurable laughter often befalls me, the girl that’s so giggly and loopy
Never wanting to grow up I’ve held on, a kid at heart I’ll forever stay strong
Aching to succeed and truly be happy, to find my true love whom will always stick by me




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Written April 6th, 2005

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  • Marcy Anna
    April 7, 2005
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    Much power to you, stay happy and young at heart!


  • Peas in the Sink
    April 6, 2005
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    Awwww... this was such a touchy poem. I know it me at heart. I have liked to always be a kid and have that "true love" that would always stick by and never leave or do wrong to me. But I haven't found her yet. I have a g/f friend now but she is drama. Good luck in that happiness. But overall good piece!!

    mr-sweet


  • Samplette gold member
    April 6, 2005
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    A beautiful acrostic, and a little more insight on who you are. Very nicely done. It is always nice to read your work.
    S♠m