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Storm

thunder rumbles



storm's on the horizon



I wonder



if I was lost


(out there)


who would find me

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Erm, I don't think I can even begin to explain this...
Written April 5th, 2005

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  • SEA angel gold member
    October 11, 2005
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    Good

    You might not be able to explain it but I feel it. Even if it is only originating from my own feelings and your point of reference is totally different...I feel it too...in my own way. On my own.
    Edited on Oct 11, 3:50 because ''.

  • floodlights
    April 5, 2005
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    cool

    This reminds me of a Haiku. Strong, singular image. For some reason, I really like that the line "(out there)" is in parenthesis. It seems to fit.