my shades wailed as they mourned
and bid my soul with tears
the ashes of horror shattered with
doubts of a vowed gamble of pain
the ONLY VICTIM soaked with lies
looking into the vampire's eyes
my warped heart shed the curse
as it crossed the moon, blazing
into darkness .the grave was
drained with angels bleeding
MY NAME
0.the ME that aches with the memories
i chased and the life i failed
the dignity of disgrace,
the letter of hate
the death of immortality,were all my past
caved in the misery and carved soul of yours
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Written April 5th, 2005
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hey..thanks for your comment..am soo sorry but i forgot how to write anything cause it's been a long time i didnt log into allpoetry.but i thank you and am glad that you liked it.i'd check some of your poems asap.
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wow thats amazing. i looked at you cos Crystal Dreams had recomended you on her page and hey im glad cos this is one awsome writte
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Wow, such an amazing write. I dunno much about what's happening in your life, but it seems ur going through hell! i probably can't say much to help, just know that there's a light at the end of every tunnel...
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Oh babe why so down on yourself? Pain seems to ooze out of this heart-whelming poem. And as good as the imageries are,I can't help but feel sad because you are feeling so down!
Get off your ass, and do something! There's nothing more dangerous than being idle and empty. Feel better soon! -
i shall say OMG..i MISSS U SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH..WHERE HAVE U BEEN..i tried to call u but u didnt respond on ur mobile..thnks alot for the comment..how's everything and ur lilll kid and nour..i shall remain speechless there's nthing to say but wht abt u..take care nd see u soon..
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Amazing Poet
You have nothing to say!!! OMG lady that was incrediable, sorry it took me forever to get here. I love your work as much as I do you. Miss you so much my little sousOU -
thnks fofr the help..i apprecaite it ..hope to see u soon..thnks for the poems..lilll sousou
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MR SPRINGFIELD:: RABZ u left me with bare words to think abt tht is meant to be SPEECHLESSSSSSSSSSSS
..thnks for the kind comment..i appreciate it ..see u soon..take care..lilll sousou
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hey simmi the miserable..i miss u ..thnks for the comment..gonna call u soon..cant w8 to talk to u..how's everythin..where have uu been..take care..plzz keep in touch..
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I Wish to erase ur past and Take U from The Dark to the Light.
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Very expressive and has a lot of depth to the idea you portray. I've read this part over and over 'the memories
i chased and the life i failed'...really touched me.
I really enjoyed reading this and the imagery it creates. It uncovers a soul corrupt with emotions and lead by the pain inflicted on it.
Speechless'ly,(?)
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sweety this was really gud n i miss ya like crazy cant wait till i hear from ya miss u like crazy n im always here 4 u always!! lov you love always simmi the miserable
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