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It IS a wicked game.

I have no idea where to go.
What to think.
What to do.
I am afraid it's all because of you.
Last week it's this,
this week it's that.
Is it a game?
How long will it take to find out?
I am losing trust in you.
There is more to say
but I say no more.

Author notes

There is a story w/ this, my friends know. after thinking (about the situation) and writing this poem it somewhat reminded me of the chris issac song (HIMs version) but not totally. but thats why i have that title.     shrimp is always good...#3
Written April 4th, 2005

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  • lonelysoul14
    April 7, 2005
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    lonelysould14

    that is good kaite! hehehe it's kelsey!

  • XXLoNeLyPoEtXx
    April 5, 2005
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    cool poem. it made a good point. thx for entering, good luck

  • confusedsoul666
    April 5, 2005
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    thanks, that means a lot.

  • classicalrage
    April 5, 2005
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    Smile i love you!!

    Hey katie....we all know bryans an ass who's lucky that you would even look in his way...(even if he IS a sexy beast beyond ALL reason ) but he's also 16 year old boy who wants to fuck around and you deserve better, you are my best firend and i love you, you need someone who loves you too, not someone who is faintly interested in you because your ass is nice and conveniently right infront of him. There are better looking guys.....WITH SOULS out there, you'll find someone, and i know it can't be easy being around me and paul all the time either, but sometimes i would more than willingly take your place and be free to date who i want when i want for how long i want. Nice use of HIM i think you out did the music video ( which was creepy ....man? or woman? ) Vallo would be proud, and so am i...your going to surpass me someday i'm telling you! (actually i think you already have
    love you k-t-grace! *flower*
    Bri

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