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Hidded Within (Beth)

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Her personality is sweetness
Intelligence fills her mind
Devoted friend that cares
Dreams of love far away
Excellent writer of poetry
Devoted to her cousins

Wishes upon the stars
Is beautiful inside and out
Tries to do her best
Has beautiful dark hair
Is a wonderful daughter
Never disappoints me.

Author notes

I wrote this for my newly adopted AP daughter. I am so proud of her and her poetry. She has been such a joy to know. She is such a sweet girl and I treasure the time we spend talking together. God Bless you Beth. I love You. Sandy , your AP mom.
Written April 4th, 2005

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  • Sandygram silver member
    April 9, 2005
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    Wow that was so sweet of you. Thank you so much. I do appreciate it. I am so glad you enjoyrd it. Beth is a lovely girl whom is my AP gaughter. Take care, Sandy
  • Scott Chason
    April 9, 2005
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    kind of like how YOU never dissapoint me when it comes to excellent poetry.

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 7, 2005
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    Thank you Penny. It was easy to write this for Beth. She is truly a sweetheart. She is a very giving person, it is a joy to have her for an AP daughter. Take care, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 7, 2005
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    Thank you so much Steff. I wish I would have adopted you, but you already were when we met. But I love you like a daughter. You will always have a place in my heart. Love you, Sandy

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 7, 2005
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    Thank you so much for the lovely comment Mary. I am praying for you and Andy. Please don't get discouraged. The Lord is with you. Take care. God bless you. Take care, Sandy

  • Onfire4Jesus
    April 5, 2005
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    Wow Sandy and Beth!! Yuns two are blessed with each other's love and compassion!! You expressed a lot of love for Beth in this Sandy!! I am so proud that you have taken her and Jake under your wings Keep them protected and in prayer by the almighty power of God!! God will use you to be a strong vessel in each of their lives!! Your doing an amazing job so far my friend!! I love You Sandy!! God Bless You!!
  • Praise his name
    April 5, 2005
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    Sandy this is such a sweet write I really enjoyed reading it like I always do. Wonderful write here my friend. I hope all is well with you.
    God BLess
    Mary
  • PennyB
    April 4, 2005
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    This is not only a beautiful accrostic but it is a loving tribute as well. You are very good with words Sandy and have a heart of gold. God Bless, Penny

  • AnotherFace
    April 4, 2005
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    Aw, Sandy. You're such a beautiful person. I feel honored to even talk to you. This was a wonderful poem towards Hidded within and I'm so happy you could adopt her

  • Sandygram silver member
    April 4, 2005
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    This was a beautiful comment Beth. I am so proud to have you for an Ap daughter I not only love your poetry but I love you too. God Bless you.

  • Gwalinna
    April 4, 2005
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    thank you ap mommy. this was very sweet.you are a great person, and a wonderful mom. i too treasure the time we spend together. great job.i loved it and thank you.

    HIDDED WITHIN ur ap daughter
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