I miss the happy times we spent,
I miss your smile, your touch, your scent.
Your memory haunts me through the night,
It does not fade with mornings light.
You became such a part of me,
A closer love could never be.
Now, you've left me here on my own,
You've gone ahead up to God's throne.
Just what am I supposed to do,
To keep from always feeling blue?
I know you want what's best for me,
From this pain, you would want me free.
Maybe the answer is in my heart,
Perhaps, that is the place to start,
To see you're watching over me,
And happy you want me to be.
When my time comes, you will be there,
For all eternity we'll share,
Our happiness, and yes our love,
While worshipping our God above.
Somehow, I know my heart will mend,
That God's healing touch He will send.
I will cherish the memory,
Of all the things you've been to me.
Until then...
Author notes
There is perhaps no greater pain than to loose our partner. I have been married almost twenty six years and I know just the thought of it brings pain. I can't begin to imagine the true pain of that loss. I sat down and thought of how I might feel and I have written to you from my heart the things I really believe. Death is not good bye forever.
Written April 4th, 2005
A contest entry
- Inspirational by Honeydew.
300 points, ended April 7, 2005, 15 entries
Silver trophy winner
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Penny..hello this is Honeydew ..I thought I would drop a line saying I am hanging in there..things arent as well as could be ..It has been almost a year since my husbands passing and it doesnt seem to be getting any easier for me..I 've reread your poem and it is so beautiful and inspirational..thanks again...Honeydew
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OH thank heavens!!!
You wrote this so well taht my heart was going out to you, wondering if this was the explaination for your haitus.
I am seldom so relieved to read an authors note as I was this one.
Needless to say you did an excellent job of showing the poignancy of loss and knowing the other would want you to go on living.
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aww... this is a really sad poem!!! It is sooo beautiful and emotional and heartfelt!!! Good luck in the contest!!!
Hugs,
Beth -
Inspirational
Fantastic work. Like you, I cannot imagine the the pain of losing my life's partner - it's not something I can spend much time even thinking about.
This is definitely a poem of inspiration, and of hope. You have really done well in spelling out that hope of eternal life that we have. I wish you all the best in this contest. -
Lovely
This is such a lovely poem Penny. I could feel the emotions here and I am sure Honeydew will get inspired with this. Goodluck to the contest! Cheers!
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I cannot imagine what it would be like to lose a life mate but I have an aunt and when my uncle died, she was so stuck in this daily routine they shared that even WEEKS after his death she was still pouring two cups of coffee every morning. This is penned so well and the rhyme is perfect. That is not something I master at all. I can do it, but it's such a chore for me. good luck in your contest!
♥ Kimberly -
Deeply moving
Wow, Penny! You were able to slip those shoes on of experiencing a personal loss in such a convincing way. Your ability to emphathize with the hurting is outstanding. Just tells you what kind of person you are~full of compassion and concern. And then on top of all of that you've got talent to boot! ♥ vj -
As you may know, I do not always love this rhyme scheme.. but boy am I ever warming up to it! This poem was another great one that displayed that pattern. I really myst say.. I love your work. With the way that things have been in my life lately.. these are the poems that make me smile and happy to be alive. This piece was heavenly.. I wish you the best of luck in this contest!
Justin -
mm i am loving this.
i dunno what else to say
well written
Libb* -
GOOD JOB
I enjoyed reading this you did a great job and yes it would be very hard to go on without your love one that you have spend most of your life with good luck in the contest SAM
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PENNY B-This is absolutely so beautiful...IN YOUR VERSES you have no doubt answered many of my guestions and you have captured my many feelings..I would like to thank you for this very special write..again very beautiful!
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I love the ending, and the rhyming was great. This was a sweet poem. I've never been in love, but I can't imagine what it would be like to loose a good friend or a family member. So, I think everyone can relate. Good luck in the contest
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