Come take my hand and walk with me
down shadowed lanes,
‘neath dancing trees.
Let the light play on our skin
grant me kisses
steeped in sin
Wrap me in your feral arms
As I sample
of your charms
Lay me on the vibrant ground
caress me till I
come unwound
Bind me to your swollen need
confess your love
as we proceed
Your fingers twining in my hair
as I kiss you
here…
and there…
Worship me as I will you
sipping of
sweet passions dew
Make love to me beneath the sun
Until our hearts
unite as one
Patricia Gibson-Williams
April 4, 2005
Author notes
I commented on your poem Feelings; and Acoustic Lullabies by shattered angel. Patti
Written April 4th, 2005
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A contest entry
- Seduction/Romance by MYownFreedom.
300 points, ended April 18, 2005, 7 entries
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had a few entries that did not bother to read and follow rules..I am finding out who and narrowing it down from there...Thank you for entering and following the rules
-Amy
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This sends shivers down my spine, I am glad it was this one I clicked on to read, it has an almost chant like feel to it which is mesmerising in itself, every word followed from the nest flowing perfectly setting the scene for that seductive walk.......Glad I clicked and thanks for sharing
Hugs
Sanity
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This is an awesome write .. so beautiful and erotic .. loved every word, they flowed into each other perfectly .. well done hun
~Aimee
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this was a beautiful poem almost lyrical....adored each stanza and each line poured out emotion....loved it xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
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A lovely sensual love story. It compliments the picture as it does the poem. The poem gives off its own visions aswell. All together a good piece.
Natalia -
Steamy words. Extremely vivid write. I felt myself wishing I were there.
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agrees with Masterblaster this seems like a dated write...it is very subtle but direct in its seduction...my favorite line was
Worship me as I will you
I haven't thought of it like this but you are so right, almost like a pledge of one's self. Love poems that I have to read twice...great
Peace
Muddy
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Very erotic...yet beautifully written. Love your stanza:
Bind me to your swollen need
confess your love
as we proceed
Your fingers twining in my hair
as I kiss you
here…
and there…
Great Write.....and thank you for entering -Amy
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erotic but pretty. nice flow great imagery hehe - somethin we all want huh?
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aww! i like that, it's so cute! so adorable. very unqiue in your taste, it's so simple in words, i like that a lot! i see and read it, and it gave me a picture in my head about my man one day. don't know who but hey, at least my Lord knows. good job, i enjoy it!
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Erotic with no vulgarity, nice write, it seems like one written so long ago and I liked the feel very much, lovely flow, very pretty poem, a charming write and it was a pleasure to read,you have my applause,
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