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I Awake

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I awake,
Warm and sheltered
Tangled in the sheets… and you.

Sweet breath’s feathers cross my skin
Still damp
With passion’s dew.

I awake,
From soothing dreams
Cocooned in your embrace.

No thought to leave this heaven of
Bodies entwined
In one small space.

I awake,
Sated… nestled
Your hand upon my breast – divine!

Saturated with your scent.
Wondering
Which legs are mine.

I awake,
With sultry smile
Remembering short hours past.

Moans – sighs – spent thighs
Understanding
Dawns at last.

I awake,
To your caress
Fire stirring – no lust can slake.

I have slept through life ere now
But with your love…
I awake.

Patricia Gibson-Little
August 21, 2001

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Written April 4th, 2005

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  • Jon Walters
    April 4, 2005
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    hey still drunk but this poem smiles to me!!!!!!!!


  • Jon Walters
    April 4, 2005
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    LOVE sweet LOVE, echo's ,,, sweet finish .... topm,, hich up--- hich up w ........... really blike poem but drunk now!

  • forgotten path
    April 4, 2005
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    sugary sweet. a touch can spring a thousand words and a tousand emotions. i felt the passion you felt in this

  • PerfectStranger
    April 4, 2005
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    Awwe.. if I only knew the feeling of waking up next to the one I love being tangled up in them. But, sadly, I dont know that feeling.. Great write and great description.

  • Poetress2005
    April 4, 2005
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    Must be nice to find someone that actually loves you back, I have loved one guy for over 4 yrs now, he doesn't want to hurt me or something, although him going out with other girls and messing around with me when he's single is killing me.
    ~!V~

  • coldest day ever
    April 4, 2005
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    well..you must really love someone. i had odd pictures in my head at times but that's alright.it was still a great poem. keep writing

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