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Love Me Do




Darkness fills my hollow skies
But through your eyes I see the light
Love me tender, treat me right
Be my lover day and night

Let me lean on you my friend
For I have no one else but thee
You understand me honestly
Be my baby, please love me

Erase the streams of crystal tears
Replace them with your precious love
Be my angel from above
For you're all I'm dreaming of

So let this captive heart be free
For I was made for loving you
And if I'm right, you love me too
All within our golden blue

For throughout space, my timeless love
Your heart is what I've longed for
My guitar strums, across the shores
As I love you forevermore


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Love, love me do, you know I love you, I'll always be true, so please, please, please.....love me do...
Written April 3rd, 2005

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  • Trellis
    May 4, 2005
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    Ah! Your reference to an early Beatles song in your title drew me in! This poem is fantastic! Although none of your poems disappoint! Great tribute to your relationship!


  • Extreme Princess
    April 10, 2005
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    wow i really dont know what to say on this piece it was absoutely beautiful it opens a beautiful painting of someone's life and how much that person loves another person... but honestly this piece also reminded me of how much luv my fiance I havent never had my life unfold infront of me by someone else's writing well besides my own but anywayz it was georgous i loved tha flow of it... keep it up and i hope to read more from u in tha near future

    Tabby Cat Kat

  • Ameliee
    April 10, 2005
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    You have a wonderful ability both to write and to love.

  • misunderstood09
    April 9, 2005
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    woa how do you write like that you seem just like a pro wait you arnt just like a pro you are a pro!!!


  • April 9, 2005
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    thats a very good poem, i wish that i could rwrite poem that were that good, hopefuly i will some day.

  • teddyb251984
    April 8, 2005
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    it should be i song i agree with that. I want love like what u are writing about. thank you for this wonderful poem.


  • x- dancer -x
    April 8, 2005
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    fantastic!


  • April 8, 2005
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    Omg, That was the most beautiful poem I ever read! Keep writing Yout awesome at it..It's So Awesome! ..I'm All.. Happy Now! I LOVE That Poem!


  • Sonja
    April 8, 2005
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    Sweet

    This poem remindes me on Beatles. I can hear their songs right now!


  • Touchof1der silver member
    April 8, 2005
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    I have to smile at all of the comments stating that this should be a song because you do have it posted at lyrics. I think the fact that so many have stated it anyway just goes to show you what a great piece you have penned here. The tune is felt and heard quite plainly. As always, your words create a smile and add great pleasure to the reading. Awesome work as always!
    ♥ Kimberly

  • Lord Gegishov
    April 8, 2005
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    Excellent!

    Darkness fills my hollow skies
    But through your eyes I see the light
    Love me tender, treat me right
    Be my lover day and night

    Let me lean on you my friend
    For I have no one else but thee
    You understand me honestly
    Be my baby, please love me

    wow! I am speechless-- breathless, even. How amazing you are, dear poeticweaving in weaving together such spectacular images. Amazing write, dear one! Keep it up.

  • rosebud
    April 8, 2005
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    I agree, this should be a song...congratz!


  • Kiwiberry
    April 8, 2005
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    ssSweeet music

    Bring it on in a song!


  • April 7, 2005
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    This is very sweet and Ilike it..I can't say I feel totally like this but do have a special someone. Great write!!!


  • Sharon Corr gold member
    April 7, 2005
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    I can't stop loving you.

    True love never parts
    When you open your heart
    On the wings of the wind
    You’ve let my heartstring in

    You’re love has grown warmer
    In the silence rains
    Beyond the window pain

    You see the door ajar
    In my heartbeat near and far
    And I don’t need to defend
    We remain one lover my best friend

    As the drums beat to a silent melody
    That only the angels can hear
    As we rise to one mercurial sunrise
    In the joy I’ve found in your angel eyes

    Oh, the magical tunes within you
    Oh the love that is forever burning your beauty
    I can’t stop loving you
    Even if you want me too

    O behold
    I can’t stop loving you
    In your wings of golden and blue
    When you sing the truth
    As you always do

    I value you
    And all you say and do
    Beyond our chains our summer rain
    Is the light within
    Beyond the seas of sin

    I’ve always let you in
    I’ve felt you in my heartbeat
    As if you’ve always been one within us as we
    And even if you’re far away I’ll send my love today as yesterday

    Beneath the wandering stars within all our hearts
    Is the love to carry the stormy clouds away today
    As you sing of yesterday
    And the music in the eternal rains

    One million angels strong
    My beloved love is our love song
    Tis the love of the one
    That brings us the summer sun
    In his glory dominion and power
    Our love reaches high above these early towers

    Now and forever is his song
    Knowing that eternal life
    Is where we belong
    Wrapped as one within the angels songs

    That flow thru me
    That flow thru you
    In all you say
    In all you do


  • EarthShadow
    April 7, 2005
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    great!!!

    this is completely beautiful. nearly brings a tear to my eye! i love it. omigosh i totally adore it. you did SUCH a fantastic job on this. amazing piece. truly truly impressive. applause for you of course! wonderful job. very heartfelt piece that im sure many people can relate to. keep it up! you have excellent poetic talent. write on! <3Laraine


  • ComeIn-VisitAwhile
    April 7, 2005
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    I really liked this. Wonderful love poem. Truly great. Beautiful! You can feel the desperate longing for love in this poem. Not many can you do this for but yours I feel as if I'm you crying out for love. Lovely! Absolutely brilliant. Keep up the wonderful writing!

  • VintageEyes
    April 7, 2005
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    yay!

    so beautiful....same title as a beatle song....so coolioness!! nice job....**thumbs up** ttyl ~~~KYNA~~~


  • ForsakenOne74
    April 7, 2005
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    it was alright

    over all this wasn't my type of write...there were however lines I did enjoy.

    *Love me tender, treat me right*
    *Erase the streams of crystal tears*

  • chillwithbrett
    April 7, 2005
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    Great

    I really liked this. Wonderful love poem. Truly great.


  • eseloco42
    April 7, 2005
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    good stuff

    Bravo!


  • Luthien Luinwe
    April 7, 2005
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    Beautiful

    Beautiful! You can feel the desperate longing for love in this poem. Not many can you do this for but yours I feel as if I'm you crying out for love. Lovely! Absolutely brilliant!


  • duana
    April 7, 2005
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    This is so very sweet. I really enjoyed reading this. Keep writing....you have a lot of talent, as I am sure I don't need to tell you.


  • babygurrl12
    April 7, 2005
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    this is so awesome. its a nice way to express your feelings its very cute and i loved how you wrote it and i love the rhyming and like all of it was very strong. great write keep it up... im me sometime maybe we could talk.
    c-ya
    steff (babygirl)

  • Book Baby-Babe
    April 7, 2005
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    Wonderful job! Marvelous!


  • Nightwish girl
    April 7, 2005
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    LOVE IT!

    This is AWESOME! I MEAN IT! BRAVO BRAVO BRAVO! I know when you love someone like that it is very easy for them to become your muse in your work. Never stop writing! Have you ever thought about becoming a song writer? You should really consider it.


  • honeybrown
    April 6, 2005
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    awww! this is so sweet! i dont know wha telse to say! antoher MAGICAl love poem that i thoroughly enjoyed! great write!
    luv always
    ~Tiffany

  • Whisper
    April 6, 2005
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    Very nice lyrical piece, with excellent flow and polish...also very sweet and loving theme. I also loved the Beatles reference in your authur comments.

    One nit: in the third stanza, the line "For your all I'm dreaming of", the "your" should be "you're"...

    Still a great little piece..

  • GoldenHope
    April 6, 2005
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    i loove the beatles! this poem is very cute.. i like how you say that you have no one else except for this person that you love. i like the line"Erase the streams of crystal tears" . its creative. but most of the poem is kind of cliche and simply written, basic. i really don't like the part "be my lover day and night" was it a forced rhyme?
    anyway, good job
    jess

  • poethal
    April 6, 2005
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    this poem is very well written mainly because of the images in it. i love the idea of crystal tears.


  • Simply Nat
    April 6, 2005
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    Awwww... how sweet!! I loved this poem, it's just adorable. The title gives it a nice finishing touch as well... Up with The Beatles!

  • babygirl7
    April 5, 2005
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    awsome

    hey i thought it was great.i loved the way you put music into it.and how you used the title of a beatles song.i mean if you meant to do that.i applaud you


  • Naughtygrlred
    April 5, 2005
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    funny i have a haiku call love me do, thanks for sharing!

  • gingergreentea
    April 5, 2005
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    well, I definitely like the song you alluded to in the title. I've always been a Beatles fan so that's a plus for me. This could pass up as one of their older songs, actually, the more upbeat pop rock that went on to become classics.

    Keep writing

    Kannika


  • silica silver member
    April 5, 2005
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    Too much sugar for my palate, laid on with trowel and heavy mallet… crystal tears and golden blue… I fear your licence overdue! But hey there’s many a ‘softy’ in the wings, with whom the romance gently wings. So take no heed of silica shards – and pen a plethora of greeting cards!

    I was lured in by the title though – so…


  • earthlygoddess
    April 5, 2005
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    this is really sweet, but your "thee" kinda threw me...i get the feeling it was for rhymes sake because the rest of the poem didn't use old english...This is a great feeling, you expressed it very well. peace -mary/nevaeh


  • April 5, 2005
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    "For throughout space, my timeless love
    Your heart is what I've longed for
    My guitar strums, across the shores
    As I love you forevermore"
    Wow...thats so beautiful...for some reason that last part just speaks to me. I could like get lost in it for some reason, its just incredibly written. Overall though, the poem is the perfect legtnth its not too long and its not too short and wow...I just love it! Keep up the good work...awesome job and write your heart out!


  • queenie
    April 5, 2005
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    you have done it yet again.you take love poetry to new heights.this is just a wonderful piece.so simple and full of emotions.the more i read from you,the more i want to read.this makes every woman long for a man that can recite true words of love like this.


  • Think
    April 5, 2005
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    I am not familiar with the song you mention in your comments, although my mom tell me it is a Beatles tune. LOL Your poem is beautiful. It makes me smile from ear to ear to read. Love is so wonderful if you are blessed to have that certain someone at your side. Splendid work.

    Lisa

  • piccola silver member
    April 5, 2005
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    the background was very distracting

  • aDozenRoses
    April 5, 2005
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    Great talent displayed here. Wonderful write! Such a realness! No other words can describe this poem..if they could trust me, I'd tell you. GREAT ONE!
    -sydni

  • romantic-soul
    April 5, 2005
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    I loved it. Great writing ability you have.


  • QuarryGirl
    April 5, 2005
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    Average

    well I loved the Beattle refrence but I though the poem was just average. I didn't really feel your passion. Good effort.

  • Jambaqua Miruni
    April 5, 2005
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    by the way, it is an AWESMOE poem!

  • Jambaqua Miruni
    April 5, 2005
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    Oh no! I've clicked on this before and left a comment....

    Please forgive me!!! (I feel stupid...)


  • Rose Patrick
    April 5, 2005
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    wow, this is so beautiful,it take my breathe away with it sweet words. there just is not really any words good enough to give it the right praise that it deseved. I can only say that i love every word of this. i think that elecent writting. i thank so very much for shareing this fine piece with all us








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  • The Axe Shall Fall
    April 5, 2005
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    hey i really thought that this poem was ace and i love reading something happy for once thank you!


  • masterblaster gold member
    April 5, 2005
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    It was wonderful until the last stanza then you went out of flow and meter, read it aloud to yourself, it is such a good poem shame to spoil it right at the end, very easy to put right just read it aloud, you are a natural at rhyming so in two ticks you will fix it, great write and such lovely feel, all the best, hugs, Di

  • GypsyRain
    April 5, 2005
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    wow, i really like your poem, its awesome, like really heartfelt. the name is awesome too, correlates very well with the poem plus its by an amazing band, the beatles are amazing forever and ever. anywho your poem was really great keep up with the amazing work. wooo... wow.


  • Talia
    April 5, 2005
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    The beatles eh?? I got a feel of Elvis, must have been the love me tender line LOL

    This is a lovely piece of writing. So full of gracefull love... Where's my knight on a white horse eh??

    Just lovely

    Natalia


  • blinkbelle
    April 5, 2005
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    great poem, marvellously written with real strong emotions.
    well done
    B
    xxx


  • RubyFire
    April 5, 2005
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    excellent

    very beautiful poem

  • abdulrahman
    April 5, 2005
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    what a fasicnating i reALY LIKE UR TERMS U SUSDE WHT A NICE POEMU HAVE HERE I AM GLAD TO HAVE READ SOMETHING


  • IronIcecream
    April 5, 2005
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    beautiful sincere inspired
    as for the guitar as a fundal... is the perfect one
    write on for you write with your heart
    as everyone should be

  • -Silenced Dreams-
    April 5, 2005
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    This is simply gorgeous. I love it. Its beautiful, vivid, deep and the imagery is incredible. A wonderful write, written to perfection with a smooth and soothing flow. I could just hear the music in the background

    Take Care
    - Becca


  • poeticweaver gold member
    April 5, 2005
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    Thanks!

    Yes dear Sherry, it is a real song title from the beatles.... I seem to be drawn to music with the content of love. And it's written for all to enjoy, not just my honey..... Thanks for stopping by, I miss your words upon my poetry... Much love always sweet soul, Timothy


  • Sherry gold member
    April 5, 2005
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    Lovely writing Timothy for your wife? Hey isn't that a song?
    The title? Sherry

  • Sharon Corr gold member
    April 4, 2005
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    Brilliance TRUE GOLD I love you heart and sou

    I loved you from the moment I saw UUU
    you looked at me that’s all you had to do
    I feel it now and I know ou UUU feel it 222

    I love you more than ever boy I do
    I love you I love you I love you
    cause you’re my sweet sweet honey treat

    I want you in the early morning boy
    I want you
    I want you
    I want you

    I’m living every moment just 444 UUU
    yeah go lover go go go go
    with..In the lovin songs of your soul
    yeah go lover go go go go

    I feel UUU now and I hope you feel me 222
    cause you’re my sweet sweet honey treat
    I love you more than ever boy I do I do I do
    and you know my heart and soul is true true true

    I love you more than ever boy
    I do

    I want you in the morning boy
    I do

    I want you when I feel blue
    I do

    I’m living ever moment 444 UUU
    I do

    go lover go sing your love songs so blue
    I do


    I love UUU
    I love UUU
    I love UUU


    I want UUU
    I want UUU
    I want UUU

    do do do do do
    la la la la la la

    do do do do do
    la la la la la la


    do do do do do
    la la la la la la


    I’m living every moment boy
    444 UUU

    I’m living ever moment boy
    444 UUU

    I’m living ever moment boy
    444 UUU


    do do do do do
    la la la la la la


    I want UUU
    I want UUU
    I want UUU

    I love UUU
    I love UUU
    I love UUU


    do do do do do
    la la la la la la

    do do do do do
    la la la la la la


    do do do do do
    la la la la la la

  • SwollenHeart
    April 4, 2005
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    XDDDDDDDDD awww so sweet

  • LuvSux11
    April 4, 2005
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    this is real cute and short and very well open with emotion usually i kinda hate love poems cause theyre open to voulnerable things and feelings that are sometimes you know left unsaid and well you did a great jop of exposing all of that i truly bow down to you

  • Jazzy Lady
    April 4, 2005
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    This poem is very cute. It is great. keep writing.


  • Shuyin
    April 4, 2005
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    Really good poem. It looks like you have a lot of emotion in this piece. It reminds me of something that I would write to my love and such. There's one thing though that I am glad to see you do. Not rhyming. Rhyming takes the piece and seems like it will basically distort it, to fit a rhyme sceme. As I stated, very good poem.


  • PurpleSky
    April 4, 2005
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    just sitting here for a bit soaking up these beautiful words. ahhhhh so lovely just like that heart you possess and I adore
    love and hugs
    ~Lena


  • True Love Gal
    April 4, 2005
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    This was really good I enjoyed reading it and I hope to read more of your poetry, keep up the writing and never stop


  • Kalexi
    April 4, 2005
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    Bro T

    OOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooooooooh how cute, and inspired by the beatles song

    Truly beautiful as always

    Love ya,
    Karen

  • social-chaos
    April 4, 2005
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    Excellent

    This was such a sweet write!!! You did an amazing job with this! I loved it!

  • Jambaqua Miruni
    April 4, 2005
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    I loved this! I loved the old song lines that were in it. The flow to this was really impressive, and it kept me holding on throughout the entire poem. Great work!

  • Deadlylies
    April 4, 2005
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    This would be a great song I could see myself singing to it for sure...great job with this one
    ~lost lovez

  • Poetic Fanatic
    April 4, 2005
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    Sweeeeeeeeet Read :)

    Hey Tim,
    Very impressive writing here. Excellent Expressions Of Everything good about love. Thanks for the invite. It is truly a delight for my night. Keep it flying high. lol
    Tommy


  • tattoomysoul
    April 4, 2005
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    thats beautiful.... lol i love it being in love is so awesome has the power to enlighten and inspire great work


  • poeticpieces
    April 4, 2005
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    Wow! Dang daddio, another wonderful write written by the best author ever known! Lol... well i guess i am braggin' because your such a great poet and I just love ya! Plus your my dad haha... Well I really love this poem, andI think it was pretty, great write dad, and i guess all i can say is ya got-r-dunnnnn! lol... , much love laters

    -Little tim


  • PonderingPoetess
    April 4, 2005
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    The rhyme, timber, beat all of it is as close to perfection in poetry that I have ever read. It is always amazing what a marvelous muse love inspires. You have done a fantastic job of capturing the absolute essence of love me do!! Awesome work

  • Red Red Rose
    April 4, 2005
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    Love you do, I do
    Til the seas run dry, and the brown lake turns blue
    Til the earth stops turning
    My heart for you is burning
    You write with such pizzazz
    Why don't you try some lyrics in jazz?
    This song is a tune, inspired by The Beatles
    you sang it with such style
    Keep on singing songs of love
    I will relax and listen for awhile.
    Love, love, love me do
    I hope you love me too!

    Hugs and kisses
    Linda XOXO


  • Sunkissedrose
    April 4, 2005
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    I don't think there is a friend on here that you have that doesn't love you, you, you Such a cute and wonderfully written piece. It just screams folksy in a way.....ya know? Keep on penning sweety, and I can't wait till we collab again.
    ~Carrie


  • Whispering Winds
    April 4, 2005
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    I will love you
    Till the earth turns cold
    Believe my love is true
    For its you I long to hold

    I life you high
    With my love
    Above the sky
    To the heavens above

    It is you my friend
    That should know
    My love has no end
    And this I will forever show

    HEHEHEHE

    Lovely poem/song
    I love it very much.
    Thanks for sharing your lovely heart
    Once again my friend
    And I will forever be loving you
    Till this world has to end...

    Much love to you always,
    Tammy

  • JETS jets jets jets
    April 4, 2005
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    The title caught my eye, so I had to take a look. This is a very sweet poem. I enjoyed the rhyming throughout. I can see a lot of song lyrics from different songs throughout this poem, but it fits in with the title, so I guess that's cool.
    Just one correction. I noticed in line 7,
    You understands me honestly
    understand should be without the s.
    Good job! Thank you for featuring this piece. I really enjoyed it.


  • adios muchachos gold member
    April 4, 2005
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    Dear Timothy,
    I think if the beatles can't inspire you to write a poem, nothing can!
    Very nice poem indeed.
    I think your son put it, "He's got a good voice to sing songs"! and you do Timothy!
    Glad I happened on this this evening!

    Regards,
    John-Las Vegas, Nevada


  • infinite spirit
    April 4, 2005
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    oh i love this poem! its so beautiful! the feelings of longing and love are made so apparent in every word! truly a spectacular piece!


  • Queen of Cups
    April 4, 2005
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    I think this could be a song .nice write flowed well reminded me of the Beatles .

  • watermelon
    April 4, 2005
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    love love me do...you know i love you...lol! what a great poem! I really loved this alot! the poem has great rhthm and flow to it! keep up the great work! i'd love to read more of your work! !


  • CoronaX
    April 4, 2005
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    hey i like your poem for real i write love poems too im going to add you to my favorits great job love Ursula so with a hug and a kiss im out like this im me back laters


  • Kendall Campbell
    April 4, 2005
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    As soon as i read the title it reminded me of the beatles , this was wonderful , i read it with the thought of hearing Lennon on stage singing. The rhyming in this was perfect , this was one of the best i've read in a long. Truly put me in a good mood.


  • myrataal silver member
    April 4, 2005
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    Certainly LOVE

    I love you, I do, I do, I do, I do, I do



    ly poem!

    Myra


  • April 4, 2005
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    well done!

    I like how you wrote this poem-whoever you wrote it for is a lucky person

  • Scott Chason
    April 4, 2005
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    sweet poem, everyone deseverves to be loved.

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