Hold me, touch me, make sweet love to me
let me feel your hard body pressed against mine
feel your silken breath caress me from head to toe
let me feel your love flow through me making me complete.
I want to make passionate love to you on a private beach
surrounded by the sounds of the ocean and seagulls.
I want to hold you close to me and feel your heartbeat
beating in unison with mine as we peak together.
Come with me on the magical journey of love
feel me tremble , feel me as the passion in me
begins to spiral out of control. Hold on tight
as we go to the highest point of togetherness.
You are what keeps me awake at night yearning
and makes me forget everything else.
You mesmerize me with your piercing
gaze and make me want you the whole day through.
The need for you becomes all consuming
my mind unfocused and lost in the fantasies.
I become so inflamed in the heated dreams
I know I will spontaneously combust.
So I beg of you, love me , take me to stars
let me meld with the heavens within your arms
and as the dawn's colors rise over the horizon
let the feeling of you inside me be the sun's warmth.
Author notes
Written April 3rd, 2005
A contest entry
- Love, Any Kind by EmptyAccount.
300 points, ended June 12, 2005, 14 entries
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Sensual and erotic
Hi,
This was so passionate ant loving, intense and erotic. Making love such as you describe is truly a magical feeling. All the elements are here...visual beauty of making love on the beach, intense imagery. I loved everything about this write, I especially loved the ending 'let the feeling of you inside me be the sun's warmth.' That was beautiful. Thank you for sharing and thank you for reading and commenting on my write
--Johnny
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This is passionate and sensual with out going over the edge. I really liked this poem, you did a nice job with it.
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Beautifully written, my favourite part was 'let me meld with the heavens within your arms'; simply fantastic. Great expression.
Ascoltatore. X -
It says what is secretly in the hearts of those seeking their soul mates. So passionate and moving. I loved it.
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Very Good
Very well written! I really like this poem! Good job. You express your feeling very well and get your audience drawn in. I like how you let the reader know about the surrounds. Such as the sounds you would hear and the feeling that would be from nature. But, yes, very nice work! -
thank you I had missed that one.
Yes and don't we all have experience with these feeling at one time or another.
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Yup! I knew it would be different. I like it. Sounds like you have some experience in this field. In the first line of the fourth stanza, you need an s, do you see where?
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Beautiful poem. Its very well written. I loved it! ~ashley~
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thanks your comment it means alot to me.
You know its hard for me to be inspired sometimes. LOL
besides I pale in comparison to your work. HUGS
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I loved this when you wrote it, still do. You should write more often you know. You are very very good
Hugs, ME
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