You look at me and see an angel.
I look at you and see a fool.
You think of me as worthful.
I think of you as cruel.
Because you must know
Nothing can ever come of this.
You sit there sulking
Because this thing called love is a deathly kiss.
What is “fate”?
But a romantics hope.
To help one wait
I’m not yours, nope.
You look at me and see an angel.
I look at you and see a fool.
You think of me as worthful.
I think of you as cruel.
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about a guy who thinks im the one...
Written April 3rd, 2005
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i loved it...great write.. i liked it a lot...makes me think of this guy thats crazy-obsessed with me..and he wont take the hint that i have a boyfriend and am NOT dumping him for him...gawd i hate that anyhoodles.. GREAT wRite
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baby...wow maybe we should talk, we've kinda drifted and im SAD i never see you anymore im SO staying the night soon, PIGGY BACK RIDES ALL NIGHT! maybe i can try giving you one...i hope i wont drop you on the couch again...hahahaha i love you!
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kukana thats so true lol and i think a guys mind is like a big fairy tale...wonder what thats like...lol! but thank you both for commenting on my poem i really enjoy reading what you have to say.
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I really like this! It says so much to me... I have those in my past who wanted to be with me... that said they fell in love with me... but I did not want them... there was no interest there at all... I always shake my head when i hear some guy say yeah well if she wasn't with this guy she'd be mine... OVER MY BODY!
where do they come up with that? LOL
Overall great write as always!!!!
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i like this ppoem and think it kinda ironcic and true well done
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