Hello, girls.
My business trip is going fine!
Here are a few letters I’ve written for you:
To My Malzipoo-
Hi, I hope you’re stringing your boyfriend along nicely-
don’t be too mean to him!
Remember,
whatever your talents are
fly with them and you’ll go far
and find a guy who doesn’t have his eyes
on other girls,
well, since that’s impossible
I’ll stop right here
and just tell you the obvious-
whatever that is…
OK, some dad!
Anyway, here’s the keys to your new car!
Love, Dad
To My forever little Ghost-
Hey- I’ve got some Hilary Duff,
Britney Spears, Justin Timberlake CD’s,
an Orlando Bloom movie,
and I’ve invited all the jocks and preppie over,
and I’ve decorated the house in pink-
we can all listen to you play lead guitar,
then you can give the whole crowd a big speech
at the school dance
where I’ve invited several politicians!
Sounds like a great weekend with good old dad, eh!
Ok OK! So I’m a BIG TEASE!
I’ll go back to my electronic music now…
Your future car?
Sorry, you’ll have to drive Malz’s
hand-me-down car-
but you get a brand new motorcycle!
Yours forever, Dad
To my middle girl Nicci, who’s all grow'd up-
Don’t worry about MacKenzie-
she’ll be a tough little cookie
with a granddad like me
to manipulate!
We’ll study science together
and she’ll be the best gymnast in town-
all before she’s five!
You’ll be so proud,
because most of all
I like to see you smile!
Your dad and granddad,
Dad
See you all soon!
Love, Dad
P.S.
Tell your mother
I love her!
Author notes
Written April 2nd, 2005
In a list
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- * Malzy • next in list
- Love Era- Romantic Comedies • next in list
A contest entry
- Their Daddy??? by Mrs. Dumas.
500 points, ended April 9, 2005, 2 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
What did you think
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Truly an endearing piece
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Wow, this is a great write my hubby I can see how you won Jess over and how well your eyes are opened up to the gift of bribery
No really, this was really sweet, thanks for directing me here. Hope all is well in your corner of the world this morning.
Be Well and Be Blessed.
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This is really sweet, and I love the pictures. LOL Good luck. Hugs, Patricia
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Awwwwwwwww,the babies are so cute,that is so adorable,just had to stop by and say that seeing as how I can't enter this contest,but oh my that picture is so cute,by the way who's babies are they?Just absolutely adorable...luvmybabys...
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Malzipoo isn't being too mean to me... she bites though, hard. Lol I kid I kid!
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This may be the first entry, but this has set the bar so high, well, I don't see any others passing it! Absolutely beautiful, creative and fun. This is destined to win! Honestly, how could anyone ever top this? I don't know, because not only do you already sound like family, but you sound as if you'd fit right in with this crazy family. Great job and best of luck! (Just so you know... mistreat my neice and grand neices and you will have the whole family to answer to.) Penny
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This is really great! It's sweet and adorable and you always do so awesome with the whole writing thing (lol)!! Go You!
~Jen -
This was adorable; I will have to wait for the other two girls to read it and see what they think on it. I think you did a great job with the different letters and I loved the fact that you made it like you were on a business trip and said tell your mother i love her.
Awwww, and that picture; both on the background and the actual picture are adorable!!!! THanks for entering!
Jess -
Excellent
That was so awesome! Great job, this piece was so sweet. Good luck in the contest! -
Cool contest. Thanks for making me laugh.
Amythest -
Hey
This is so sweet, Im gonna check out your author page just to get the vibe from you. Lol.. so you assumed I had a boyfriend- close enough and Im not too rough on him.. a new car? I like you already, and I like the way you did the three different girls each on a little letter, and that picture! I love it. Lol.. anyways, thank you for entering and good luck in the contest. I already feel sorry for the winner 
Three girls plus their mom and crazy family to deal with- no wonder its taken a while for an entry.
Once again thanks
Malzy
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