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Lickety-Split

I have one fancy I cannot  possibly tame,

More tempting than money, men, or fame.

Unbelievably irresistible and creamy,

Leaves my palette watering and dreamy.

It comes in all different delectable flavors,

It satisfies even the biggest chocolate cravers.

It can be piled with any tasty topping,

All of which make your taste-buds zing.

Chocolate, strawberry, or smooth, rich peanut butter,

Dunked in the most velvety fudge makes my heart flutter.

Topped off with some caramel and dollops of whipped cream,

Finished with chewy, gooey candy pieces make it a dream.

Its sweet, cool and subtle texture makes it mouth watering bliss,

A messy, sloppy banana split is a sugary delight I always miss.

Cookies and cream with chunks of Oreo,

Mocha as awakening as a cup of fresh Joe,

English toffee so completely buttery and yummy,

A big hot fudge sundae warming my empty tummy,

Oozing with sauces and chopped nuts galore,

As you can see, Ice cream fuels my inner core.





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I scream, you scream, we all scream for Ice Cream!!!
Written April 2nd, 2005

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  • d a f f o d i l
    April 7, 2005
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    this was aweosme yummmmmmmmmmmy am hungry now!!!!


  • CountryCousin
    April 7, 2005
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    Yum yum.

    This is very fattening as another person wrote but so delicious in reading. Me I like mine with pie but you sure captured it in this write.

  • jabberwocky
    April 7, 2005
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    Wow, I think I gained weight just from reading this! Something tells me you're a bit of an ice cream fanatic, but I could be wrong!

    Best of luck in the contest!


  • Mistress Claire
    April 4, 2005
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    he he he this is a really cool write, its pretty funny and the rhyming in it is very good. well done claire x


  • iamfromabove
    April 4, 2005
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    Cool might just have to attack the freezer now. Best of luck in contest.
    Mia


  • kami
    April 3, 2005
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    HAHAHA what a joy to read this...oh dear i could use a banana split..you made ti flow quite well..with the rhyming...enjoyed it thouroughly....thank you for entering
    kami

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