Open, exposed
You told me how you felt
You felt scared and alone
You made my heart melt
You told me everything
How you were afraid to let me know
I said to you to not be worried
And to let the feeling flow
You know how much I want you
I know how much you want me
We know everything
Your love you let me see
I want to be near you
I want to feel your pain
I want to hold you
And shelter you from the rain
You say you find it hard
To let someone in
But yet, your heart
You let me win
I want to let you know
Before I go to sleep
My body, my mind, my heart
Are all yours to keep
Author notes
Wrote this in the very early hours of the morning near the end of July 2001. It's for a very special friend of mine.
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this is a really great poem and judging by your other poems a great author. it shows so much passion and caring toward who it is directed to and it seems you care for them a lot. thank you for a good read!!!
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Awww, love is splendid =o)
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simple and cute :) good write!
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Very sweet, nice rhyme and form
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i thought it was very sweet and sincere.
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