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"BATTERED HEARTS"

'BATTERED HEARTS''

Tortured souls on earth we are,
hearts burn so like distant stars.

Suffer through our hopeless lives,
no rest for all us battered wives.

Tormented minds and broken hearts,
spirits pierced like Satan's darts.

So death would be a welcomed breeze,
from all the things he's done to me.

For in death I'll have some peace,
the pain and hurt shall finally cease.

A debt is owed and must be paid,
and God shall have his final say.

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Written July 10th, 2001

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  • Ava Noire silver member
    January 17, 2002
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    wicked...so much pain & anger expressed...to live in this heartache is so horrible...

  • sandy
    October 6, 2001
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    great poem. what a wonderful way to release your pain. keep writing . it helps.

  • Ld Marduk
    September 6, 2001
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    Truly a sad poem. And a fine one to boot.

  • XxnecovesperxX
    August 31, 2001
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    all i can say is great!

  • Katrina Armour
    August 22, 2001
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    Great ending.

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