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Lest we be apart

Lest we be apart
just as we are now
think of me kindly
for you know I would
rather be there 'thin
the span of your wings

And I belong nowhere else
but with you

Though the cat's paw* tear
me away from you
think of me as the sun
at night

I am the blood in the moon
and my tears are the
stars

-28Mar2005-

Author notes

My thanks to MuddyKing for pointing out the errors.

Yes, the cat's paw is this one: antwrp.gsfc.nasa.gov/apod/ap030717.html
I'm sure you'd be able to figure out what I mean by that line.
So there really is a part of me that is still mourning. The day I wrote this poem count up to eleven since my pet cat died.
Written April 2nd, 2005

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  • Dark Visions
    April 15, 2005
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    very sweet poem

  • Sleepless Nights
    April 15, 2005
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    thumbs up

    hey nice poem...really touching! Keep up the great work.


  • MuddyKing
    April 15, 2005
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    the word rather instead of rther...the loss of any animal is tough ...especially if they were a big part of your life..sweet but sad write
    Peace Muddy