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So Soft She Is...

So soft she is,
    like the delicate petals of a rose
    that's part of what has drawn me to her I suppose.

So soft she is,
    like a starry night that fades away
    with the light of dawn's first ray.

So soft she is,
    like the gentle wind that slowly starts to blow
    my feelings for her have begun to grow.

So soft she is,
    her skin like satin to touch
    a feeling which is almost far too much.

So soft she is,
    like a warm spring rain
    I know she feels and understands my pain.

So soft she is,
    her tender kiss
    I never thought would make me feel like this.

So soft she is,
    with a beautiful face
    my heart is captured in her embrace.

So soft she is.... 

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Written March 7th, 2001

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  • thekurtlover
    August 10, 2005
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    goody goody gum drop

    wow, this is deep. did she get to see this poem you wrote to her?


  • Jaspe
    August 10, 2005
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    A beautiful poem, but I'm guessing you already knew that.
    The softness of love. It holds us up and inspires such confidence. You did a wonderful job capturing that in this piece. The comparisons to such splendid things and feelings is great for expressing yourself.
    Great write.
    Peace.

  • buffytheparrotslaye
    August 10, 2005
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    Tenderly Touching!

    A beautiful tender rose and love the repitition of "how oft is she".Sotly musical and lots of romantic play with words made this a lovely poem!

  • Molly Densmore silver member
    August 10, 2005
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    I'm melting... this was so beautiful and so lovely. Your write is filled with love and romance, So well written and your expression of love for her comparing her to roses or satin, etc.. was so beautiful. Just lovely my dear, this was wonderful. Thank you for sharing it.


  • Auburn Sunrise gold member
    June 4, 2005
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    This is absolutely beautiful. Very soft and sensuous imagery. I love the style and format, and your perfect rhythm and rhyme. I wish I had wrote this - then I'd be very proud of myself.
    Excellent job!!!!


  • -Miss-Samantha-
    June 1, 2005
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    oh wow. that was beautiful. the girl who has you, if there is one right now, is very lucky to have you. with your beautiful words and all. nice poem. keep it up. oh, and best of luck in the contest, i'm sure you'll place and do very well.

  • kryswriter
    June 1, 2005
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    very lyrical and tender. this is a gorgeous poem. i'm sure any girl would love to have something like this written for her. the repetition of your title line does not get old, as it does oftentimes when others use repetition. you've woven together sincere, beautiful words to create a wonderful work. fabulous job!


  • Aedara-Wren silver member
    June 1, 2005
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    beautiful, so sweet and tender and just generally beautiful!!I love it!! well done and I love the repetition it makes a sound base for the rest of the poem!! Dara

  • Darkwolfen
    June 1, 2005
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    Beautiful

    So so beautiful the girl you wrote this about should feel lucky to have you. I wish I had someone like you and maybe one day I will. This was a beautiful tribute. You painted your picture well. I don't know why but the flow of this reminded me of a whisper or a crisp summers breeze. This might also make a great song if presented right. Excelent just excelent.


  • ArieLLeGiSeLLe
    June 1, 2005
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    This poem is incredibly romantic. I think it was very sensual and I would not mind if someone wrote this for me. Good job, DrkPoet!
    Much Love
    Arielle Giselle
    The One and Only

  • Stella Shall
    June 1, 2005
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    So beautifully floating

  • Decano
    May 24, 2005
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    wanted to applaud this LOL!

  • Decano
    May 24, 2005
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    Kicking All Kinds OF Ass

    Wow, This is amazing! As someone who mostly writes lyrics this is utterly great... if this hasn't been published I would be shocked, but I greatly enjoyed this write.
    Edited on May 24, 3:19 p.m. because ''.

  • lucky star
    April 24, 2005
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    This is truely brilliant, I really really like it!!!! I loved your style here and I thought your rhyming and imagery was fantastic!!! Best of luck in the contest!!!


  • Niki1227
    April 4, 2005
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    WOW I really like this one it was beutiful Keep it up You always take my breath away Nikki


  • KillMeNow89
    April 2, 2005
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    whoa. i think that's a cool song(or whatever)! i really love the first stanze. keep up the great work DrkPoet. i'm gonna add you to my favorites so i can read all your stuff. might take me a while to comment on all of it. once more, keep it coming!
    crystal

  • Hobbit Warrior
    April 2, 2005
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    I think someone else said this sort of sounds like a song, and I agree. It's simple, but very sweet. Nice job,
    Amanda


  • JustAnotherGirl
    April 2, 2005
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    amazing work!

    umm..what can i say! Absolutely aweseom write! Fell in love with the WHOLE THING! your amazing at capturing feelings!
    So soft she is,
    like a warm spring rain
    I know she feels and understands my pain.

    ^^favorite part! Keep writing. YOuR AwEsOmE!

    (read some of mine..pleaze!)
    -liz-


  • April 2, 2005
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    It sounds like someone is in love..and if this isn't written from personal experience, you seem to capture the feeling well regardless. So soft she is ... very sweet, made me sigh


  • Stac
    April 2, 2005
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    oh wow. If you don't win that contest...it was rigged.lol. I really like it though. It's a beautiful piece.
    STAC

  • Sarhii
    April 2, 2005
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    Very very good! I like the repitition it drives your point home and it's wonderfully romantic. You must love her a lot to say such nice things about her. If only every woman had a man who felt this way about her.


  • Alice Anesthetized
    April 2, 2005
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    ooo. so jealous. U must love her!.

  • XxLucifersXBridexX
    April 2, 2005
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    wow, i love it!!! u must really luv her! awesome!


  • crisstiena
    April 2, 2005
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    lovely

    Just lovely.
    Some of your words are a little cliched, but the
    sentiment and feeling are all there. I love the
    repetition of 'So soft she is'. It gives a beautiful
    gentle feel to the poem.
    I would be wobbling if someone wrote this for me.
    blessed be ~ crisstiena


  • The Pipers Call
    April 2, 2005
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    very pretty. good work


  • withdrawal
    April 2, 2005
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    It's very sweet! I thought the first three lines were trite, and a bit dumb that you said "I suppose". But you kept going and it was great, very sweet! I hope she loves it <3
    ~Jen


  • Giezo
    April 2, 2005
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    Wow. Great poem. I think many people can connect with this intense and beautiful message. Repetition really adds a lot to poems and you sure know how to use it.


  • jonnyfaint
    April 2, 2005
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    its a very cute poem with a very good flow but i think starting the poem off with a huge cliche is kinda not the best way to go, this is not like making fun of your poem but comparing a rose to a women is very used, like super used, so i would suggest changing that, and i would also suggest making some of the others ones more origanal also, like something that makes me think, wow, i never thought of a girl that way, thats dude from enlightening my brain to new metaphor, peace baby


  • ficklefeather
    April 2, 2005
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    Almost like a song. Simple and beautiful in, well, in a very delicate way. The title truly drew me to it so congratulations about that! It's like a gloved hand beckoning my skin, coaxing my eyes to read on, "read on and you will be pleasured" - and indeed I was. Brilliantly writ. Best in the contest!

  • XxLeftoverCrackxX
    April 2, 2005
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    .

    I agree, the usage of repition really gives the reader a true understanding of your thoughts. I wish someone could have written this about me. Whomever this is about, she is truly lucky. But anyways, awesome job, I loved it!

  • aussiechic4444
    April 1, 2005
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    This made me smile. I love to see someone describing their emotions and the things they see. This piece was very discriptive and made me appreciate the loves in my life, wonderful.

  • shiv
    April 1, 2005
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    excellent

    keep it up..... that was great.
    Edited on Apr 01, 11:50 p.m. because ''.


  • Raining Tears
    April 1, 2005
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    I loved this poem. It made me think, man I wish I was this girl. Well Thanks for sharing!!! Take Care
    --Shelly


  • SheWasPreternatural
    April 1, 2005
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    No words can describe...


  • lightwithinyourdark
    April 1, 2005
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    this is such a wonderful poem! i really enjoyed readin it. i love all the descriptionsa dn analogies you use in it. i particualrly liked how creative this poem is. it is not written in a common style but in an interesting one that is fun and easy to read. i really liked it, and it showed alot of emotion. anywho, awesome write, so keep writing, and have a nice evening!


  • Andy Stephenson
    April 1, 2005
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    You capture part of the essence of what draws men to woman, but what draws women to men?

    Andy


  • Kukana gold member
    April 1, 2005
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    This is absolutely lovely... whoever you have written this about must be overwhelmed by your insight right into her soul... never forget the feelings that you share now... never lose grip of her "softness"
    S~


  • April 1, 2005
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    i love the repetition. and that phrase, 'how soft she is' its truly beautiful. like rose petals, yes. it leaves me with a sad longing for someone to say such a wonderful thing about myself... 'so soft she is' that is truly a brilliant line!
    well, great job with this. i give you my kudos.
    brava-
    sabrina


  • suseann
    April 1, 2005
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    Thought provolking

    Too passionate,so very alluring words that paint a beautiful scene.Great write.~~~~~Suseann


  • April 1, 2005
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    How lucky this girl is to have a endowed poet write her poems.

  • amz my heart
    April 1, 2005
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    Oh how the heart piter paters when I read such wonderful things said in such a great way!" So soft she is" I loved how you put a picture of what you were saying in my mind, it was like I could see everything you were talking about..beautiful !!! thanks for sharing it with me..xoxo


  • Pookiebubu
    April 1, 2005
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    I really love the repetition you've used throughout the poem, and the structure of the words. You don't often hear "so soft she is". The line draws the reader into each stanza of the poem.
    Such a sweet intimate poem. Thank you for sharing your feelings in this poem. I enjoyed reading your work.


  • DazedAndConfused88
    April 1, 2005
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    Outstanding

    This tugs at my heart to no end, even though the piece does not contain much, the short sentences carry so much emotion within them it's frightneing.

  • Forgotten Lyrics
    April 1, 2005
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    *sniffles* awe. This is so sweet. I loved this. I have found that the poetry here is some of the best I've ever read. So for that, hats off to you, you've got the best poem of the day award. Well, it's Friday, so, the week. I loved this it was beautiful. Did I say that? Well, I'm rambling now, so, I'll close with "Keep writing" so, keep writing.


  • SweetFreak
    April 1, 2005
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    this is so pretty. i love the flow that you have going on here and i just love the affection that you show when you wrote this. keep up the great work and pen on!!

    -Tamara

  • Shadow Wolf90
    April 1, 2005
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    This was an awesome poem and I enjoyed reading it and imaging the guy I like thinking that of me. Just to clear this up, this is not Shadow Wolf but her sister BattleOfBlood, I am under her account to add some of her poems that she asked me to add. I just wanted to make that clear, alright well amazing poem. Keep up the great work. My favorite part is:

    So soft she is,
    like the gentle wind that slowly starts to blow
    my feelings for her have begun to grow


  • BoReD 08
    April 1, 2005
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    This ia a beautiful poem. It has great rhyme and flow, whoever you wrote this for(if you did) is a very lucky and special person. Good Job!

  • cry-silent-
    April 1, 2005
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    I loved this poem, especially your use of repition! You're an excellent poet, keep it up!

  • BloodTearsDrop
    April 1, 2005
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    Yes this is how I feel about a friend of mine. She is very soft and very gentle. I love it when people like you write good about the one you love. It just shows that whoever your lover is you care about her a lot and you dont want to lose her. Very good.


  • Sapphire gold member
    April 1, 2005
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    This is a very beautiful dedication poem to someone who has obviously touched your life in such a special way. The comparisons and descriptions you have used in this poem are soft and gentle, showing the soft and gentle side of your nature. I love it when a male is not afraid to express their emotions about their partner. Something you have done extremely well in this poem. Brilliant writing, keep up the great work

    Sapphire


  • Anothercheapheart
    April 1, 2005
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    you must really love this girl to write about her like this. how lucky this is a beautiful poem, and really descriptive. great job, keep up the great work!!


  • Darr Kingston
    April 1, 2005
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    Excellent

    A beautiful and enticing piece of poetry. You did well with describing her existance to you. Good flowing words and words that were chosen well.

  • brokentenchi gold member
    April 1, 2005
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    That is an awesome write. The way you repeated yourself gives an awesome effect. It really makes me wonder what she did to grab your heart as she has.


  • mattjb
    April 1, 2005
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    Good I like this, poems about love one are such a good thing to write about!


  • jenniferzlomke
    April 1, 2005
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    wow i really enjoyed this the mystery of who lingers in my mind as i must wonder what a woman to find that could capture your heart this way what beauty she must be i wish i was loved this way great write thanks for sharing totaly enjoyed

  • dawnstar
    April 1, 2005
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    The woman who inspired this poem is very lucky to have won your affections. I hope she appreciates your beautiful words. It is truly special to have found a partner who is unafraid of his/her own heart.

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